[Report This]Date: August 02 2015 11:25 PM Title: Introduction
Poor Michael, feel bad for the little guy. Can't believe Selena could be inconsiderate like that. Really hope to see more of this story. Definitely a rare gem.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2015 4:54 PM Title: Forgotten
Something tells me if Jack and Michael did tell their mother, about Selena's new attitude, she might side with her daughter.
:-(
[Report This]Date: July 31 2015 12:55 PM Title: Introduction
I like those day to day lives of shrunken or little people and the challenges they face and the good moments.
Date: July 31 2015 7:48 AM Title: Frienship and Harmful Words
Oh wow, Selena and Michael really had a fight there!
I like Tess, she seems to have depth and an air of mystery about her.
Hope you'll update more regularly because this story is very good!
Date: July 31 2015 7:45 AM Title: Bullies and Gina's Lunch
Gina is scary, first day and trying to have mouth play with Michael.So far I'm liking the story, its keeping me engaged!
Date: July 31 2015 7:42 AM Title: The Truth comes Out
Oh wow, he nearly died! A little ugly stuff there as Selena practically squashed Michael's chances of going to high school and then he yelled at her but maybe it got resolved a little too quickly. I'm reviewing as I go along, I could be wrong.
Date: July 31 2015 7:39 AM Title: Morning
So far I like the relationship the tiny guys have with their giant family, its much better than having them be treated like chew toys.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2015 7:19 AM Title: Frienship and Harmful Words
Uh-oh! Sibling abuse because of peer pressure? Classic GABOHSD (Growing-Apart-Because Of-High-School Disorder).
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 9:31 PM Title: Tess
His first day in a new teacher's class, and he's already falling asleep? Not very complimentary to Mr. Krayson! ;-)
Date: October 15 2014 5:39 AM Title: Bullies and Gina's Lunch
Hey! When r u gonna update?
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 3:53 PM Title: Bullies and Gina's Lunch
For the anatomically unaware? The uvula is that little thing at the back of the mouth that Jerry Mouse usually uses for a punching bag whenever Tom Cat gets him past his fangs.
Or, was that Sylvester and Tweety? ;-)
Date: July 06 2014 4:06 AM Title: Bullies and Gina's Lunch
I like this story but I'm not sure if that mouth play part was what I expected... :/ (oh well I guess I just hate vore etc...) but I'm glad you updated and you've done a good job so far!
Author's Response: Sorry, that was a one time thing for all our Mouth Play fans. (I hate vore too.) Thank you for reading and leaving a review! -Julianz
[Report This]Date: July 05 2014 7:19 PM Title: Introduction
I'm hoping for some sexy stuff, if you know what I mean. Great story!
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 5:44 AM Title: The Truth comes Out
Hi! Just wanted to say that this is the type of story that I love! I love tiny guys going to school! Haha I know that sounds weird! Anyways, I'm really excited to read this story and I know it hasn't been updated since November but man am I anticipating this update! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Its coming soon, maybe today. But don't worry, I'll finish this story. Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad people enjoy my stories. -Julian
Date: January 10 2014 8:58 PM Title: The School
Hope you can update this story soon
[Report This]Date: November 27 2013 1:11 PM Title: The School
So, Selena and Tess are estranged friends, huh? Post-middle school growth apart? Or, does Tess think Selena stole the affections of some middle schoolboy she (Tess) had a crush on? I only ask because Tess' relative under-reaction, to Michael, makes me wonder if she's an introvert.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 1:11 AM Title: Gina
Pretty good story so far. I hope you'll have a chapter where it's dedicated to Michael and Jack's relationship to their sisters. I really like to see how Jazzmine feels about her tiny brothers and how Selena became sort of distant towards her 'little' brothers.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 7:02 PM Title: Gina
Whew! These additions were so good, I skipped right to this chapter following the cliff-hanger at the other one. That being said, I have to admit; you partially scared me there, with Jack's stowing away on Selena's shoe. I thought sure he was going blab the entire contents of the arguement, thereby nullifying Mike's wish. But, you proved me wrong. So, now we have only to see if Gina can be trusted.
Author's Response: I have to say, you really are a genius at predicting things. I mean figure out the possibilities before they even show up. Bravo my good sir. Also, thanks for commenting, good to know SOME people are still reading this.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 3:20 AM Title: Gina
I wonder how his first day will go. I hope he doesn't regret it. There are plenty of thing you can do when you are tiny. Like spying on the girls.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 7:03 PM Title: The Truth comes Out
Another chapter. Is it christmas? Great addition, I just wonder how his mom will take it. Will she show him that he can't make it or will his sisters? Cannot wait to see where you go with this.