[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 1:55 AM Title: Toothpasting
Excellent as usual. The dialogue is positively chilling and the action is as palpable as it is sickeningly brutal. I'm normally not a huge fan of gory stories, not because I'm opposed to them, but because most people lose the limited realism factor of these stories in those segments. What you have here is both grounded and descriptive, which makes it all the more impactful. Great stuff here. With your talent for this particular genre of fiction writing, I'd love to at some point see you tackle a story that revolves a bit more around extended torture play that's perhaps even exclusively mental rather than physical, but whatever you do, keep contributing here, because you're very good at it.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 7:02 PM Title: Toothpasting
Since the chapter was called "Toothpasting", I sort of expected Jasmine to squeeze Heather like a tube of toothpaste. I thought that Jasmine was going to put her thumb on Heather's pelvis and kind of drag/push her thumb upward, cracking Heather's pelvis, making her bones splinter and pierce her organs and abdomen while forcing her innards and blood to all come up out of her mouth (provided that Jasmine didn't accidentally crush the girl's chest first.) Wow. The more I think about it, the more I can hear faint, wet, choking noises, gurgling, retching, and bones cracking. Hmmm...I'm beginning to question my sanity...
If you want to use the idea that I posted, you totally can. It'd be really, really cool.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love your writing style in this story really superb. I've just never been a big fan of the violent/gore but you've made this one very enjoyable for me. Also I loved the tiny's size, anyways hope to see more of your tales.
aaron
Author's Response:
Well I've just never been a fan of not getting reviews and I guess you gave me one so this sentence has kind of fallen apart on me.
Thanks!
Date: November 29 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I ADORE the casual disregard this girl has for her pet / toy's well being, very hot! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
A great one-shot. You have a talent for using conventionally nonsexual elements of a story and turning them into something unique and fun. I love the bit where your giantess character is talking on the phone while casually dropping the battery on her tiny. It's subtle but just as powerful as the rest of it and gives a real sense of who these character are and what the power structure is. I also love the personal details you add in, such as the briefing on the tiny's past, and the fact that her captor is younger than her. It gives it actual emotional weight, which is pretty impressive considering how short the story is. Fantastic work.
Author's Response:
You know that that scene was what created the rest of the story. It's all a vehicle so I could do that. So I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
There's always been two things i live about your stories. One is the ability to turn every day things into dangerous items in unexpected ways... a less imaginative person would have just used insertion as the torture method. The second is how deliciously non-chalant your giants are to your tinies. Its gorgeously evil and highly sexy ^_^