[Report This]Date: February 04 2015 8:51 AM Title: And then . .
A really superb wrap-up. Although, I dearly hope that Franky's catatonia is just his shrunken body's way of recuperating from everything he was put through. And, thus, NOT permanent!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 11:35 PM Title: And then . .
Dang that was a terrible and wonderful ending. It's terrible because it ended. And it's wonderful that there are future plans for the series.
I love the idea of a prequel. Seeing Madison with her first friend or friends. Also I'd love to see a 3rd sequel. Even if it's a shorter short. Franky, has to wake up. He just has to.
I'm super excited for your future plans. This series is the best on this site. And will be my favorite forever.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 7:33 PM Title: Lost and Found
I'd be lying if I said I didn't feel a bit shafted by that cliffhanger ending...I really think Franky deserves to be happy after all he's been through. But overall this was a great series, and I really enjoyed the ending and seeing Maddison get her comeuppance!
A prequel with Maddison would be cool although I can already foresee it being alot darker than these stories since we all know how all her previous victims ended up. It would be interesting though, I might not read it though if it's too much for me.
I actually rather have a sequel to this where we get to see more of Franky living life as a tiny with his new family. But thats just me. Anyway, whatever you decide to write I think you'll do it well! Good luck and I hope to see more from you!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 8:16 AM Title: Showdown
And, just let me further state: HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS INTENSE!!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 8:07 AM Title: Showdown
Let me be the first to wish you...HAPPY HUNDRETH REVIEW!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 11:25 PM Title: Showdown
Awesome chapter, I think you should post them separate. Just because that's means there are two more chapters of this amazing story and series.
So I am curious of what you have planned for the future. Are you going to add another story to the series? Or is this the end, and your starting a whole new ordeal?
Date: January 30 2015 3:41 PM Title: Showdown
Sweet! I'm glad for the update, and it looks like Maddison is finally done in for good! But now how are they supposed to re-grow Franky? Is he gonna be stuck the size of a hamster for the rest of his life?
Author's Response:
Only one way to find out! But, as for more practical purposes if I ever want to resume writing the series it'll give me a definite loose end to tie up.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2015 10:56 AM Title: Collateral Damage
No problem, dude. I'm not against non-shrinking filler chapters. I use them all the time, myself! Their mixed blessing?
They're usually only read by lurkers. ;-)
Date: January 20 2015 3:17 AM Title: Lost and Found
Please tell me one of them has a weapon!
I find Maddisons character so pathetic and tragic in many ways... Its like, she's a freaking genius, is well off, pretty, and she STILL finds a way to be a nightmarish boogeyman and scare everyone away. It's like I just wanna go into the story, smack her and say: "be normal damn you!"
[Report This]Date: January 19 2015 8:32 PM Title: Collateral Damage
Wonderful chapter, I didn't know Madison care that much for Franky.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2014 11:04 AM Title: Back in the Action
RIP, Frankie and Louise. :-(
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 11:26 PM Title: Back in the Action
Best story on this site. I'm betting Madison, because of the size difference.
And I sad that Madison wants to eat Franky.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2014 8:33 PM Title: Back in the Action
Great story, I love maddison. So my money is on her.
Date: December 19 2014 7:53 PM Title: Back in the Action
Ugh, this was the stupidest thing Louise could have done... The only thing that could happen here is she get's stomped, what else could she do?
[Report This]Date: December 04 2014 2:24 PM Title: Dysfunctional Rescue
Yep! That's definitely no "small" discovery on Louise's part.
;-)
[Report This]Date: December 03 2014 4:20 PM Title: Dysfunctional Rescue
How's this even a question? Of course Louise should go back and get help! What can a tiny do by herself? Jeez, don't tell me this is gonna turn into a horror movie where everyone except the killer are morons! The fact that Louise found them is great, she took advantage of the fact that she was tiny to check under the door. But there's no way she should go in alone...
Author's Response:
This is true, but Louise is very driven to prove a point right now and can be very short-sighted. Also who knows where Jenna went to look for her, and it might take too long for her to reach Elise and Liza. Plus she doesn't know how much danger Franky is in. Does she risk her own safety and go in solo or does she risk Franky's safety by taking the time to go get help?
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 8:17 AM Title: Familiar Territory
True love means _never_ having to brainwash your love interest. If sanity were beer, Maddison would definitely be five cans short of a six pack!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 2:26 AM Title: Familiar Territory
Ha I knew Madison still loved him. She is so good at manipulating people also.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2014 9:25 PM Title: Familiar Territory
WOW! Maddison is fucking insane! And Franky is being broken down, bit by bit by her! I'm not so sure that Elise and the others should be getting involved without some outside help. Now I know this is a story, and the cops are generally useless in stories.
But if I was Elise I would AT least call the cops on Maddison with some BS story...We've all heard about people getting swatted and the cops busting in full-force and asking question later. NOW would be one of the times that being trigger-happy would help the situation immensely!
Great chapter by the way! I really feel for poor Franky, what Maddison said about him being betrayed before isn't exactly a lie either! None of this would have happened in the first place had Liza kept her end of the bargain like a decent person in the first chapter!
Author's Response:
Worry not, Elise and the gang are getting there gameplan together and I'd like to think normally they don't want legal officials getting involved because at that point after matters are resolved they'd be powerless at what the government would want to do with Franky.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2014 5:41 PM Title: Reunion Part II
You will give me A LOT of cause to thank you if you can post chapter 20 by next Wednesday (11/26/14). Lol!
Until then, thanks for giving us this update. :-)