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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2012 7:11 PM Title: Rise and Shine

Tantilizing begining,  I can't wait to see where this goe's.....

Three gigantic females, oh my goodness, SO MANY POSSABILITYS!

He better heal up quick, that's a whole lot of....................

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 1:16 PM Title: Rise and Shine

Elise might be a gentle giantess. But, I can already tell Jenna and Louise are going to out-do Maddison and Liza. More over, I'm suitably intrigued by the cryptic references to another daughter. Louise's older sister, perhaps?

Author's Response:

For Franky's sake, I don't know if he can take any more. But, Elise does appear to be his true solace right now.

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Date: November 28 2012 1:06 PM Title: ER

No time to review! I'm off to chapter 3.

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Date: November 28 2012 1:04 PM Title: Lost and Found

Franky DIDN'T drown? A miracle worthy of Xmas time!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 4:34 AM Title: Rise and Shine

Well hopefully the other two will forgive him. I have a feeling they might disturb him in his sleep...



Author's Response:

Knowing Franky's luck things don't turn out that simple for him.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 4:25 AM Title: ER

The chapter moved a little too quickly I felt, but it was good nonetheless.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 4:22 AM Title: Lost and Found

Cool! You're writing this again. A nice start and I'm guessing he will be treated better from now on.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2012 11:14 PM Title: Rise and Shine

 

to bad he pissed off Louise. Do u hate Franky? couldnt u give him more gentle characters, cant he have violent/gentle interactions lol.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2012 10:53 PM Title: ER

 

LOL "Geez Louise" I Get it. funny title

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2012 10:19 PM Title: Lost and Found

 

what???????????part2 I like

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