Date: August 20 2014 5:22 PM Title: 1: The Big Day
AWESOME story man. Shame it's an end, but I loved it. Can't wait for you to post more in the the deadly farts story.
Date: June 17 2014 6:06 AM Title: 1: The Big Day
I read this story a while back and ever since I read it have been looking all over to find it again XD Super glad I found this story again, Love it to death~
Date: February 25 2013 8:23 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
Love the story, cannot wait to see how you wrap this up.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2013 9:40 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
Loved it and keep it up
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 10:48 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
Well, I am sad that this story is cuming to an end, but I am hopeful that you have plans for other stories? (expectant stare and puppy dog eyes)
Date: January 20 2013 9:56 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
I'm going to have to agree with stubbornstain here. Second person is interesting and I don't have much experience with it, but I feel that you use the word you a bit too much my friend. Lay off the you and just describe the scene (not that you don't describe everything perfectly fine mind you!). A lot of this story is not my cup o' tea as others like to say, but it's good for those who have this type of giantess fetish.
Not bad mate.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2013 4:03 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
Yes, I agree with the two previous reviewers.
This is one great story! Lots of great descriptions! Lots of evil sexy scenarios!
Looking forward to the final chapter...
Date: January 19 2013 2:05 PM Title: The Shower [Exploration, Pussy, Masturbation]
Cool, am looking forward to it, just make sure not to make it feel rushed.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2012 10:22 PM Title: The Morning After [Butt, Poop, Pussy, Piss, Fart]
Awesomeness!!!
Best thing I've read all day.
It deserves 90 stars, but sadly I can only give 10.
[Report This]Date: December 03 2012 11:45 PM Title: Rough Night [Ass, Entrapment, Poop]
Wonderful story!
Longer chapters would be great.
Looking forward to its continuation.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 9:12 PM Title: A Stinky Situation [Butt, Masturbation, Farting]
This is what I love about this site. You log on after a few days, and find an AMAZING story like this one. Thanks for your hard work on this! I can't wait until he finds himself imprisoned in that ass...
Date: November 29 2012 4:43 AM Title: A Stinky Situation [Butt, Masturbation, Farting]
It's good, though I'm waiting for her to discover they have the wrong person. That would be a nice plot twist.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2012 11:43 AM Title: 1: The Big Day
Really good start, loving it so far, can't wait for the next chapter. Perhaps give both viewpoints i.e keisha's as well?
Date: November 28 2012 4:48 AM Title: It's Up to You [Feet, Vore]
I'm hoping there will be a happy ending...
Date: November 28 2012 4:45 AM Title: 2: Framed
Second person is hard to pull off effectively. It's a nice touch, and different but I feel there is too much "you". You can still tell us details without saying you all the time. I think "you" should mainly used in relation to speech and actions and any extra details don't necessarily need "you" in the sentence. It's a thought. I've never really had any experience of second person.
Date: November 28 2012 4:40 AM Title: 1: The Big Day
I like the story so far. Your description of her is intruiging. Remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description. It will make your story easier to follow. There are looks of useful tips in the "Writing Tools" section of giantessworld.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2012 5:51 AM Title: 1: The Big Day
An excellent start! Looking forward to more!