Reviews For How I became her shrunken slave
Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2012 12:38 AM Title: Amy's day
Date: December 20 2012 12:38 AM Title: Amy's day
Great story, hope you add more chapters soon.
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 5:44 PM Title: Amy's day
Date: November 25 2012 5:44 PM Title: Amy's day
Great story. Hope to see some interactions with him an the ladies though.
aaron
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 7:21 AM Title: Amy's day
Author's Response:
Date: November 24 2012 7:21 AM Title: Amy's day
Good story, but the chapters are too short. I suggest you make them longer with more detailed description of people, environment, perceptions, thoughts, and feelings. Also try to advance the story more with each chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm working on it, kind of hit writers block though after firing out two full stories. :)
Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2012 11:27 PM Title: The beginning
Date: November 21 2012 11:27 PM Title: The beginning
MORE!!!!!