[Report This]Date: February 22 2014 10:58 PM Title: Just Another Delivery
Please keep going. This is a great story
[Report This]Date: December 22 2013 4:20 AM Title: Just Another Delivery
I love this story, I wish you would keep working on it
Date: June 19 2013 7:57 PM Title: Unlikely Alliances
Great chapter, but will they find him in time?
[Report This]Date: June 02 2013 4:58 PM Title: Escape
Please continue this, it is coming out awesome!
[Report This]Date: May 02 2013 11:08 PM Title: Escape
Love the new chapter. Wonder if Foxy will be able to remember what happened to me. This is a great POV story. I usually don't like them but this is keeping me entertained. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 24 2013 11:54 PM Title: The Black Box
Wonderful story - full of intense decriptions from both perspectives.
Well done!
Looking foward to futue chapters...
[Report This]Date: April 24 2013 6:42 AM Title: The Black Box
Great chapter. Love the detail. Wonder how "I'll" survive. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2013 8:55 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
Love the new chapter. Will Foxy's pussy claim another victim or will I be able to get out. Cannot wait for the next chapter, you have me sitting on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. I've written the first half of the chapter already. All I need to do now is finish it and proof read it once or twice.
[Report This]Date: April 18 2013 10:29 PM Title: Sweet Dreams
Please continue!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2013 2:30 PM Title: Just Another Delivery
If hes there long enough maybe, or maybe she made him destructable. I know that if your life is in danger you tend to thrash more = more pleasure. * Did't realize I forgot to rate.
Date: March 10 2013 5:14 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
Great new chapter, how will our hero escaper? I know I wouldn't. That is the perfect way to go.
Author's Response:
well he is indestructible a the moment, so can he really die?
[Report This]Date: March 05 2013 4:30 PM Title: The Calm Before the Storm
Fantastic piece of work!
Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2013 8:34 PM Title: The Calm Before the Storm
Great story, wonder if he'll go all the way or if Foxxy will awake to the pleasure. Love this chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2013 5:49 AM Title: Struggles
I don't know why I have never read this story its great, and you have their personalities down pat. I really hope you finish this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I've decided to continue the story now that i've improved somewhat as a writer. Looking back, even in the short time since i wrote the first 4 chapters i can tell a big difference in my writing.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:13 PM Title: Just Another Delivery
i like it alot its a good idea
[Report This]Date: November 22 2012 6:57 AM Title: Let the Challenge Begins
An interesting start! Looking forward to see where you take the story. I love stories where the shrunken person can't die... Opens up so many possibilities!