[Report This]Date: November 25 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really like the story and im intrested in all the different Categories that u have. Hope we get to see some feet soon.
Date: November 25 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Here:Amber has always been stuck in the castle
You mean "had"
Also, you mean Joy's name before she has a chance to tell the reader herself. It would be better to refer to her as "she" until she says her name.
Here: scarred you.
You means "scared". Scarred means to have scars.
The story is alright so far, so I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the errors, and thank you for pointing them out.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is an interesting one, I'd like to read more sometime. Though I think I've liked all of your stories, so I wouldn't mind if you decided to work on something else either lol
Date: November 19 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
all the potential of a good story
[Report This]Date: November 19 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
great so far. plz continue
Date: November 16 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story so far and it's an interesting idea. However, you need to remember to proofread what you write.
Date: November 16 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'd say keep going.
I like seeing the sw side of things plus you do solid work good sir.
Date: November 16 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it, please continue, loads of potential here! Would be great to read a full F/f story by you.
Date: November 16 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not really somthing im interested in. One I dont care for shrinking sotries that are completly aware I like to keep it betwween the shrunken person and the giant, Two I also prefer real time stories not in the past or future.
This is just my personal opinion if someone wants this or if you want to write this it's entirly up to you. I'll just look forward to your next story!