[Report This]Date: April 15 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
I just looked over some of your stories and realized u got the best endings LOL. drama,pain,death,torture and u still know how to find a happy ending. good job
[Report This]Date: April 15 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
ahhhhh great end to a great story. I love your work and im looking forward to u future stories.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
first off sorry I dont review every ch. because I could but they all would say the same thing. I like how u ended the newest ch. with shit going down with the main characters.
I love the relationship with the princess and joy, why have a man when you got a shrunken girl?
I also love how u turned this simple (princess meets tiny) into a real story. Their are reasons why your one of my fav authors. Good luck and keep it going
Date: January 29 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
really enjoying this story and waiting for the next chapter. keep up the good work.
and @ stubbornstain, having the power to end a life at a whim with no effort, seems like a "special power" to me even if it isn't supernatural.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Amazing.....this is one of the few stories i've read on here that has taken a path from just being porn and actually having a compelling story. When Henry took Joy, I felt my stomach sink for her. You have done a great job of making me feel for your main character. well done.
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It seems a bit unrealistic to have such intimacy so soon, especially given what Joy has been through. To have Amber has homosexual I thought very odd. I didn't expect that from her. She's the princess so she can't be doing this.
Also, Amber is refered to as a "goddess" even though she doesn't appear to have any special powers, why? I think it's best if I stop reading; I don't want to discourage you from writing.
Date: January 24 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was gross. Moving on...
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the story so far! Just curious though, one of the tags is "vore", so I was wondering if amber is going to eat any of the tiny? Or if she plans to kill any at all.
Date: January 23 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow thst turned from friendship to lesbians quickly! but still good story so far
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Their was my long waited chapter. good work that was good reading. long ch thx.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
ohhh no thats a twist tiny people with balls lol. I like the way the story is going and I like how she is growing unknown feelings for the princess.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good writing as always. I'm just curious as to whether or not you'll include a lengthy anal scene from the point of view of the tiny. I've read anal scenes in your other stories, and they are really deftly written, but i don't recall an anal scene from the point of view of the victim. I would be very interested to see one, perhaps by henry or some other younger character (as that age group is almost always depicted as the victim and never the predator.)
Date: January 06 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
At first I didn't like Henry but towards the end of the chapter I began to like him.
Here:
You emotional hurt her.”
You mean emotionally.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the correction.
Date: January 06 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter i loved it i cant wait for more!!!
Date: December 14 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good story. I like the fantasy setting and Joy's mistrust of the "giants." There's room for some interesting character development there. The new chapter was great. Really liked Joy's mishap in the slipper and the bathtub.
Date: December 13 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow!! i am so attached to this story! please update soon i cant stop reading and i want to know what happens! Amber seems like such a nice girl i wish Joy would stop doubtingher trust, i guess she cant help it she was brought up to hate the giants! again loving the story update soon!!!!!
Date: December 13 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Dream about the future? That was unexpected.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah excellent chapter.
Really loved the entire scene from the foot entering the shoe till she was found and they have a nice demographic going on between them.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
ohhh secret power real nice. I like that u updated but it seemed like a long ch with little interactions between them. I kind of like the pet idea better, because that could at least give more master/pet interactions.
Thats just me though, I love your stories and im confident that u will make this story great. I love F/F Thank you
[Report This]Date: November 25 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story an I hope to see it continued
aaron