Reviewer: giantessdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Umm, so when will you be able to continue the story?

I love this story so much and would like to see more.

Reviewer: tank Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

will you continue the story

Reviewer: sketch Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just because I haven't rated it yet here.  I posted my comments on your DA page.

 

One of my favorite stories

Reviewer: kamperkonkel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, this is my second review. I usually say how I review first, just so I don't seem like a raving idiot. My way of reviewing is to say at least one thing, no matter how small, of things I both like and things that bothered me. I've yet to post on THIS site, yet. But I've done so elsewhere. Not that I'm promoting myself. Just rebutling the whole "How do you know? You haven't written Jack!". So, here it goes.

 

The thing I like, about the whole series, both of them, heck all your stuff, is that you are really good at stimulating imagination. I mean sure you have things you bring up to the front in each one, for whatever strategic reason you have. But you tend to always nail everything so that no matter who is reading, they are entertained. There isn't just on targetted audience, you have a very broad and effective writing style. One that stimulates, at least for me, my imagination no matter what the individual emphasis.

 

Ok, the thing that bothers me about this series the most... that is a hard one, since it is so good. I had to look for a while to come up with something. Sure I could point out a single spelling or gramar error, but that lacks... usefullness. So... I think it is going to be predatory awarness. Basically, you cover EVERYTHING else. Emotion, physic, mental state, sometimes mental conditions, and each character's relation to each difference. But what is sorely lacking is the base instincts of each race. Hurdles in those instincts that are just ever present that they have to either push down or go over. You do some of this, I know it is a small critic, but then again, you aced pretty much everything else. I had a hard time trying to find something to pick on. Even this is barely registering.

 

Hope that helped and didn't step on any toes. If it hasn't been said enough, your stuff is awesome.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the critique, and I think you're right I haven't touched too much on the differences between races. I'll have to work that in :) 

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, I love the setting and characters you have created man. I wait for this story patiently to be finished. Fetish material or not, I am enjoying this one based on STORY, not just that at all. Good luck in finishing it up though :D

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hell yes!!!! I love nova force!! Is midnight going to come back? Please add her, and can you have some feet interaction?

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Nova Force: 2! YES! Nova Force is one of my favorite storys