Date: July 01 2022 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Bob. I wonder me whether you'll recall me. I still find your works inspiring and so enjoyable. Are you still writing or have you quit as I have?..
Date: June 30 2019 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading this story
Date: July 20 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is "Sixty Shades of Green" a real book?
Date: December 30 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
That’s one of the best vore stories I’ve ever read. I love every bit of it. The idea that the shrunken men are nothing but play food for the giantess is very appealing. I like the contrast between life and death. This is just a playtime for her to enjoy, while going on with her daily routine (family, friends etc.), whereas for the tinies, this is the end of their life in a way in which, they are not even regarded as human anymore, but just food and something to be taken pleasure from.
I like how you enhance this feeling by introducing her family in the picture (daughter and husband). It’s very well done. For me, the perfect ending would’ve been, if the story finishes with her having sex with her husband while some of the tinies are still alive in her stomach and are tossed around inside during the act (thus, humiliating even more the little men). Maybe more detailed description of the little’s men experience while they are in, too.
I believe a bit more focus on the shrunken men and their experience inside her stomach, would’ve been better. The story seemed a bit rushed in that field (she ate them rather too quickly, and the focus was mainly on her).
In anyway, the story is amazing as it is. I would really love to read a sequel of this story (maybe focusing on her using tinies in her sex life with her husband, or maybe using tinies to play some games with girlfriends).
In short, amazing work. I love your stories.
Date: December 10 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
there's something about the normalcy of the rest of the world. The everyday hum drum that always makes these kinds of stories extra special. Knowing that life goes on and that it is not a big deal to any body other than the prey is one of my favorite subjects.
Author's Response:
That is a fact. It definately adds to the appeal
Date: November 16 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well Bob, I have just read your yarn and found it very good and entertaining. I did think at first that Penny's daughter might find the escapee and gobble him up, but that of course, would be "far too shocking" esp for the American society.They wouldn't stomach that. LOL. Anyway,because I haven't read anything for quite a while, I found this fresh yarn quite stimulating. I still imagine in my fantasies what part of the female's anotomy I would be part of after being swallowed - just as you mentioned awhile back in one of your excellent works. I shall send you an email directly. Many thanks for your stories, my old friend. T
Author's Response:
Thanks good hearing from you!
Date: November 13 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Bob. Jolly good to find a fresh yarn from your pen. I've saved it on my docs to read at my leisure with the hope it will fit the description given by Timescribe. We haven't communicated for quite a time now but I still wonder how you are. I shall submit my comments in the near future which I believe and promise they will be complimentary. As ever... Tony
Author's Response:
Hello again Tony! It's been a long while. Thanks for the reviews. I wish you the best.
Date: November 13 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree, actually that's what I meant.
Date: November 13 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lucky for me, I just came across a photo of a mother of a female friend of mine. Never seen her before, but she turned out to be a - let's put it this way; had she been a dinosaur she'd be called Milfosaurus Regina! So she fit the role of the mother perfectly! Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Sounds like an interesting photo! Glad it provided the mental pictures while I furnished the story. Thanks for the review my man.
Date: November 12 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Any chance you could kill off the husband so that a future, and non-criminal little guy can have some romance with her before he dies?
Have to say though, that the hunting and eating narrative has been the best thing I've read on here for a long long long time.
Glad you're still writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review man. I couldn't have any romance on this one as the lady is married. Maybe next time brother.