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Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good and tight story. I like your style. I'm sincerily hoping you continue with the Melanie Gold story. I'd like to see the son begin to truly suffer at her pungent feet!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a very good short story.

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