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Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: February 18

I enjoyed this.  It's well written in a technical sense, with varied sentence structure and advanced vocabulary, but also in a narrative sense with some surprisingly well developed characters considering how little lines of text you have to work with in the chapter.  I also appreciate the quasi-satirical style, it made the story all the more entertaining to read.  Good work sir.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: February 18

Nice story, english is a little rough in some spots, but that soes not really matter to me. Loved the story, hope the second part comes soon along with what is meant by " Then everone died" at the end.



Author's Response:

Thanks!
(I fixed up the English a bit, thanks for telling me. That's pretty embarrassing.)

Reviewer: seesoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: February 18

good start please continue

Reviewer: YellowBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: February 18

best story EVAR thanks a lot me

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