Date: October 13 2012 6:44 PM Title: On the Beach
For the rest of his life... awesome. May his adventure be as thrilling as the Odyssey, but much more enjoyable... Let's hope Aphrodite wastes no time getting involved in this one...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, ltltb.
Hopefully very enjoyable (for the reader). And at least one goddess is about to make her first entrance.
--D
Date: October 13 2012 6:29 PM Title: On the Beach
I like it so far, it's quite interesting!
On a side note, and I'll burst if I don't say it for the lols. The story intrigued me in the first place cause I'm Greek, so as you can imagine, I was a bit "on edge" while reading it, looking perhaps for something familiar...and then...well, my name IS Theodore, so imagine the total surprise. I was startled. Even if you weren't a good writer, but you seem you are, I'd follow the story just because of the above reasons. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
That's quite a coincidence, but I love it! (The name has no special significance for me at all, and I picked it totally at random.) The fantasy elements in this story are new ground for me, and I'll enjoy writing them. Just hadn't had time to work on the second chapter until tonight.
--scrymgeour
Date: October 13 2012 3:13 PM Title: On the Beach
A very intriguing start with a good hook for your readers to see where it leads. Good work, sir.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and happy you like it so far.