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Reviewer: Northgate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I somehow missed this story until now.  Well written and great ending - I would love to see the sequel.  Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response: It's never too late to read and review. And, you're welcome. Merry Xmas, too!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

"In short? I was looking at giantess versions of Sarah Lee Baker, Julie Kamanawanaleia, and Geraldine Towne-Kerr!"

 

In short? Pun intended?



Author's Response: Actually, all four of those were intentional puns. Guess why! ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

P.S.---This was a work of non-profit fiction. Any resemblance to actual big businesses in southern California is purely coincidental.

;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Not surprised that he got shrunk. Not surprised that he ended up living with the models. I am a bit surprised this story has come to an end so soon.



Author's Response: This was always intended to be brief. It's based on a "Choose Your Own Adventure" spoof (called CHOOSE YOUR FAVORITE VERSION) that I originally posted at Giantess City. But, I ultimately had to delete it, there, because it was apparently _nobody else's_ favorite!

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

very nice



Author's Response: Thank you! It's always nice to hear from a new reviewer. Even if he or she is only new to me. ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Finally got my internet back up. 

"Downfall" makes another good pun from you.



Author's Response: Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yikes. Talk about a painful trip. So much for him having good luck.



Author's Response: Good luck, like truth, is relative. After all; even Shakespeare couldn't write HAMLET before laying a few eggs. ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well there's no accounting for taste, and career wise, I've got no taste for accounting. LOL. Sorry, had to make that pun.

This story on the other hand is an interesting idea.



Author's Response: Deja vu. :-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is this shirt button sized object going to turn out to be something shrunken?



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Bugs Bunny: "Hmmmmmmmmmm! Could be." ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well there's no accounting for taste, and career wise, I've got no taste for accounting. LOL. Sorry, had to make that pun.

This story on the other hand is an interesting idea.



Author's Response: It was originally published, at Giantess City, as "Choose Your Favorite Version." Two separate stories, with the same narrator experiencing two different outcomes. However, neither version was evidently anybody's favorite!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

I see your muse has been busy. Starting not one but two new stories.

That's a powerful weapon Swift arrow tribe has. Think those two men are in for a rough time.

Wonder if Mr. Applegate luck really will improve.



Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see, dude. Insert fiendish laughter, here. ;-)

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