[Report This]Date: September 12 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: BOY'S ON BERRIES
The strength of this story is not in the actual voring, which is pretty non-descript, but in the suspense of the longing and anticipation of the event. And in that sense, it is very well written. And a nice interweaving of the different antagonist.
Nice job Timescribe.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
Came here for the vore and got a good story.... With less than decent vore. The story telling is entertaining, but alittle scattered to where it feels like i must switch gears between chapters. And if i were to rate the vore parts compared to others out there, it would be a solid 5.5 out of 10.
Author's Response:
That's a true and accurate assessment of this story.
Unlike some of my stuff, this as you say, doesn't have any concentrated vore, as I developed a lot of character dynamics along the way to fill up the pages.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: S.M.U.G. AND THE B.B.B.
Hmm. I might need to get in touch with these British Bachelor Boys. The slot for boyfriend is open for one. The slot for dinner... open to all.
Author's Response:
You are really too kind. It's great to have a keen enthusiastic vore girl reading my stories.
Date: November 03 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
Great story-telling, as always.
Author's Response:
And I'd just like to say (comedy store drum beats here), "You've been a great audience!"
[Report This]Date: November 03 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...
And, thus, ended his last "Ray" of hope.
Author's Response:
Or perhaps I should have said, of the previous review "It's not DRY humour."
[Report This]Date: November 03 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 32: REUNION IN CHLORINE
Why do "pools" fall in love?
Author's Response:
That joke's all wet. LOL.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 31: TO FEED THE INNER BOY
It looks like Timothy's just a "prawn" in the Game of Life.*
*With deepest apologies to Mel Brooks.
Author's Response:
Mel would probably be honoured.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 30: SWALLOWERS
I'm sorry. But, more than anything else, this chapter reminds me of an old "Schoolhouse Rock" cartoon from the 1970's.
"Lolly, lolly, lolly! Get your adverbs, here."
Author's Response:
Schoolhouse Rock.
And I thought I knew every 70s cartoon. You've always got more to teach me.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 29: CULINARY DISCRETION
But, it's also a giant gulp downward for the men. :-(
Author's Response:
It is ever downward we strive.... or something like that.
Date: October 31 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 28: A LAD OF GREAT PROMISE
I had hoped you might. By the way; sorry, again, for all the duplicate reviews at your ST/AMcB crossover. Where's the embarrassment emoticon when you really need it?!
Author's Response:
Well Boston Legal and Star Trek actually, though David Kelley's shows tend to lead on into eachother.
The only time I ever did anything McBeal-ish was in my 2003 send up "Sally McSqueal". (It's still in the filing cabinet somewhere, filed under nonsense best fogotten).
[Report This]Date: October 30 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 28: A LAD OF GREAT PROMISE
I didn't expect another chapter to devour, so soon. Well done!
Author's Response:
I started the novel months before I started posting it, and finished most of it before posting chapter 1.
It gave me something to work on while I was gradually posting Mouse Man - Time Master.
I tend to put one or two chapters up at a time, so that other writers don't have to compete with a 30 chapter overnight instalment by me.
Still I couldn't help myself in posting the Star Trek / Boston Legal story simultaneously with the later chapters of this one.
Loved the devour pun by the way.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 27: MRS LONG'S REQUEST
Talk about feminine logic. If she eats him, she'll never speak to him again, either!
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought of that. I honestly hadn't. I was just think of gts vore fantasy with all willingness to throw logic out the window. Well done again.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 26: UNDERGRADUATE YEARS
Maybe the next time they see a May/December couple, they'll be somewhat LONGer on manners.
*Wa-wa-wa-WAHHHHHHHHHHHH!*
Author's Response:
And a bwah wa hahhahahah too
Date: October 25 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 25: DON OFF THE RAILS
Join us next week for chapter 26:
"A Hart-Stopping Chase!"
*Insert dramatic ivory-tinkling, here*
Author's Response:
Very good! As always.
Date: October 25 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 24: A VERY SECRET AFFAIR
P.S.---Sorry. But, I still can't picture Ms. Long as anyone but a Maggie Smith/Honor Blackman cross.
Author's Response:
Why be sorry for that? The beauty of text is that you can read your own mental images into the stories, though I have been checking out the gts comics you pointed me to in Dreamtales with your own pastiche.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 24: A VERY SECRET AFFAIR
"The Brodie Brunch!
The Brodie Brunch!
That's the way she
Began Miss Brodie's Brunch.
Doot-doot-doot!"
Author's Response:
I think the movie was called "The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie". What a memory you have.
Date: October 25 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23: ROMANCING THE BONES
I hate to be overly serious. But, aren't you afraid of being labeled a hypocrite, and an advocate of suicide (what with the sleeping pill bit)?
Author's Response:
They were both going to die of starvation anyway, that's the thing. To paraphrase the Archbishop of Sydney, a man should pledge to give his life for his wife if the need arises, and she should pledge to submit to his authority. The true Biblical model for marriage. Sacrificial suicide is the very thing Christ did for us at the cross, to save us from eternal death, if we accept him. Won't force feed you a big spiel on that, but it's that example that the man is to follow in his marriage vows.
But I can see how the story chapter could be misleading.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: CHALK AND CHEEK
Nowadays, if a teacher tried to cane a student's behind, the student would wrestle it away and cane the teacher up-side his/her head!
Author's Response:
Yes, I'd love to have my school days over again. I got caned once a term for 5 successive terms in prep school and once in high school too.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 21: SHOULD OLD ACQUAINTANCE BE FOR POT?
As to this chapter? Intriguing theories! Matches the ancient Greek beliefs that dreams were basically (to use the modern parapsychological term) astral projections.
:-)
Author's Response:
I wasn't thinking of astral projections when I came up with this, but more a mixture of "no explanation" like Twilight Zone time travel opportunities in some b/w episodes and the occasional time travel romance movie like "Portrait of Jennie" or "Two Worlds of Jennie Logan."
I just applied the (lack of) concept to giantess vore.
Date: October 22 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 21: SHOULD OLD ACQUAINTANCE BE FOR POT?
It was "Dream Weaver," and Gary Wright was the singer who made it famous. At least, circa 1976!