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Reviewer: edexdexx Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I'm not a big fan of supernatural-like stuff in stories but this was a very interesting spin, with an unique circumstance for Ken, and I really felt bad for him. Having so many hardships in his life, while having a friend who could do everything with no effort. Great short story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. If you felt bad for him then I succeeded, haha.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Quite well done.  This works just fine as a quick one shot.  It's ok that the action doesn't pick up until the end because the main intention as I saw it was to have your giantess character talking down to her new good luck charm, and the dialogue was very fun to read.  The pun of the names with the title was charming as well.  I enjoyed this. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, that was my intention. I liked the idea of a girl benefiting from the misfortune of someone else's life, while he's unaware and sees her as a friend. My favorite part to write was her explanation and takedown of him at the end, because she can be totally cruel and uncaring. 

I really can't believe you've read and enjoyed this, since I've done the same with so many of your great stories. Thanks again!

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