[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like the slow shrinking. It is also great that she doesn't even realize that he's significantly below normal height. I hope she's into short guys (and takes a shower before he gets too small =)
Author's Response:
Hm, I didn't really explain this in the story, but, in my mind at least, Alex doesn't entirely forego showering. Rather she's just kinda absentminded and doesn't see them as a priority, so she does it when she remembers and has nothing else to do (maybe once a week). But since she's always doing physical activity and has no qualms with wearing used clothing over and over, the effects are pretty short-lived.
Anyway thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Best image 4ft Joe kneeling at Alexs feet worshipping them. picture it u love it dont you lol.
Author's Response:
Believe me, I've spent a lot of time over the years imagining this scenario with tons of different girls, lol.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hope the form a deeper friendship. I can't wait till Alex actually realizes he is striking lol. In the next ch or so can u maybe add in some actual foot worship? I know its hard because he seems to stay away from her feet even though he likes her socks lol. His love for her smell grows deeper lol. Keep up the good work :) "Feed Me More!"
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'll definitely be writing in more feet stuff. I made him gradually more accepting of her smell until he suddenly liked it and craved it since I like the idea of it having that secondary effect besides just shrinking, and it keeps him exposed to it and shrinking more (if only he knew it was the cause). And I like the parallel of growing to love her smell -> growing to love her.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Keep going as you are going.
This is an amazing story.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 22 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Keep going
Author's Response:
Ok I did.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
My favorite story so far.....and I have read alot of these stories haha. You did such a good job setting up a gentle girl, but ditzy enough to get him into some great situations that I can't wait to read about. The hygiene and sweat is such a good idea, especially when writing a giantess/shrinking story. Keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter!
~Mymiridion~
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you for the very high praise. I've read a lot of stories here and elsewhere too and I wouldn't consider mine to rank very highly, but thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 22 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love Alex, this is also kind of a dream scenario for me even being 6'3 and such irl.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Yeah I know what you mean with it being a dream scenario, although I'm not nearly as tall. Kinda useful when you imagine these kinds of things but...still think most days I'd rather be taller, lol.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice, hopefully he can learn to become more comfortable around her.
Author's Response:
Well suffice to say, with ese events and his continued shrinking, their relationship will change a lot.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
u should keep in gentle/kind because the way u described it is that she wont be sadistic. thx for answering now i know more about alex. It would be cool/helpful to get a ch. from alex's pov. God I cant wait for more!:)
[Report This]Date: September 20 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
alex seem to be very ditzy is she going to be dominant or aggressive/playful? because one of your categories is gentle/kind. I dont know how she is. She seems oblivious to joe's humiliation, or she dosent care. Feed Me More!
Author's Response:
Well, yes and no. First of all I'm sorry if I betrayed your expectations. I might remove the tag if it seems misleading (however its not that far into the story yet).
I put gentle because Alex wants to do her best to help and take care of Joe. Obviously this hasn't been really necessary so far although there was a bit in this chapter. I don't want to spoil much but, even as the shrinking continues, Alex doesn't have malicious intent. So it is gentle in that sense. But its not a completely gentle story becasue she's 1. very playful/aggressive in her ways although she doesn't mean anything by it, and 2. not very competent at taking care of others (immature).
She's definitely more oblivious. She would care if she really knew, but doesn't think of it that way and Joe is too timid to say anything yet.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start.
Very good set-up for what's to come.
I love slow shrinking with the femdom element.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there will be more action from here on out.
Date: September 19 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice so far. I'm a fan of "sporty girls" having known a few, and I can hear their voice in Alex.
So will we learn why her sweat odor causes him to shrink, or will it be a "it just does" story mechanic?
Author's Response:
Thanks. I did think about it, but I don't really have a reason for why it causes him to shrink. Pheromones etc but no real reason, because I don't want it to be an effect she has on everyone. Personally, the mechanics of shrinking/growth aren't very important when I'm reading a story like this. I know some people do. It's not a science fiction story and I don't intend to get into it when I've already spent a lot of text setting up the characters and all. Sorry.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
is there going to be some sweaty foot action? that would be cool. also how small do u plan on him getting? nothing is better then having a 2ft servant around the house! :)
Author's Response:
Yes there will be feet, probably my favorite aspect of the fetish so for sure there will be. I don't want to say exactly how small, but smaller than 2 ft. But it's a gradual shrinking process so there will be time spent w/ each size on the way down...
Date: September 18 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful start! Slow shrink is my fav, and the shy flirting between the characters is great! Cant wait for more =)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was hoping I didn't overdo it with some of the dialogue. I'll finish the next part soon hopefully and it will get more interesting.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds promising!
Author's Response:
Thanks for seeing some potential in it. I wrote this kind of rushed in spurts. This is the first story I've ever actually sat down and wrote and a major reason for that is I really dislike planning and writing beginnings. So if it wasn't too excruciating so far that's all I can ask for.