Date: April 07 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Another gem I missed... I need to read more stories on here it seems.
I saw the post about continuting this one potentially and hope you do someday xD
really solid storytelling and descriptions.
Date: February 24 2013 11:51 AM Title: Introduction
I liked it very much, as much as your other story.
I really would like to read more chapters in the future.
Congratulation, very good job.
Date: December 07 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great story! You should continue.
Date: October 13 2012 12:49 PM Title: Introduction
Keep going
[Report This]Date: September 19 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is really good, in my opinion. I love how playful the girls are, and I wonder what surprises they have in store for the boys.
Date: September 18 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good story so far. Your writing style and scenarios are well done. I also like the playful but gentle approach of the girls. The only downside is that the characters are too young for my taste (sort of adds a creepy factor. Feels wrong for me to be reading this).