Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6: CHANGED ADVENTURES

In the immortal words of Dr. Sam Beckett: "Even after years of leaping around through time, I'm still having trouble with tenses."

Author's Response:

Yes, I think if I tried too much time travel, I'd end up taking leave of my tenses too.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: NEVER SAY TREVOR AGAIN

It would've been more appropriate for him to have been eaten by Cheetah, instead. ;-)

Author's Response:

I thought of that, but the idea of Giganta doing it enabled me to more enthusiastically put myself in Mouse Man's shoes (and Doris's mouth LOL).

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 2: A CHRONIC SHRINKER IN KING NEBUCHADNEZZAR'S COURT

"Without Christian men to lead them"? If Christian men tried to lead the Amazons, they would have told those men where they can stick it. If you're uncomfortable with Wonder Woman's pagan origins, why use her? (By the way, Aphrodite was a Greek goddess. The Babylonians would have called her Ishtar.)

In terms of the creationist angle, everyone's entitled to their opinion. We can agree to disagree on this issue. I think what rubbed me the wrong way was your idea that evolution is taught in schools to undermine Christianity. That is not true. Evolution is taught because most of the scientific community believes it is accurate and has evidence to back that up. You can disagree with that evidence but please don't assume that evolution theory only exists to be mean to Christians or corrupt their children. It exists because it's based on observation. Those observations may not agree with scripture but they aren't being fabricated simply to lure people away from God.

In any case, I've ranted enough on your comment section. I tried to give your story a chance but I think we disagree on too many points.

Author's Response:

Not for one minute do the teachers of evolution have corruption in mind, but Satan (God's rogue angel enemy) did bring the evolution belief in to undermine people's belief in their creator God.

I tossed up not using Wonder Woman, but came up with the reasons I explained in a reply to one of Carycomic's reviews to modify rather than exclude her.

No worries anyway. I pass up a fair few stories myself for similar reasons to you, so I understand.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL

I'm flattered that my Mouse Man story inspired you to write your own. Reforming the character and sending him on adventures through time sounds like it could be fun.

I'm afraid I can't get behind your ideas at the end of the chapter though. You seem to have a misunderstanding of why evolution is taught in schools. The theory of evolution is based on scientific evidence and research. It's fueled by a desire to understand how the world works and how animal species change over time. It's not some sinister conspiracy to undermine Christianity or encourage atheism (and having a scientist character like Prof. Hyatt claim this seems very odd).

If evolution contradicts the Bible, that's not scientists' fault or their primary goal. They're simply theorizing based on what they've observed. Heck, I know people who are Christian and believe in evolution. They just aren't as literal in their interpretation of the Bible. I don't see why it has to be either/or. Couldn't God have been the one to put the laws of evolution in place?

If this story is going to be a "Christianity good, evolution bad" soapbox, I don't think I will be following it. Sorry.

Author's Response:

That's OK. I expected to inevitably tread on a few views with it. But no, the Biblical history lesson (from my POV) ends by Chapter 3.

I just couldn't conscion writing the story without incorporating my Biblical viewpoint. It won't be the main focus of the story. I'm only posting one chapter a day, but I've written 8, and chapters 3-8 are just gts romance and vore and sci-fi.

I guess I should answer the questions though. Literal 6 day creation story is the only one that takes God at His word in Genesis. (Day = eons is compromise, creation+evolution is compromise. There are scientists in the Christian community who adopt the literal 6 day creation belief. I'm not aiming to use the story as a preaching tool, but had to go along with my Christian friends and my own beliefs in the way I wrote the early chapters). Here's an interesting site some scientists support.

http://creation.com/

Anyway, see what you think by chapter 4 if you're still reading.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL

From the title, I was expecting Mouseman to meet that other Wonder-foe from the Sixties. Rats!*

*Yes, pun intended. ;-)

Author's Response:

The sixties will be altered too. Bear with the history lesson. It doesn't last more than another chapter or two btw.