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Date: August 05 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL

Oh, I'm not the creator of the site. :P

That's understandable. My invite remains open if you change your mind. :)

Reviewer: Mr-War Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2021 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL

Do you want to chat on Eka's Portal? I have an account there. MrWar

Send me a link to your account so I can send you a PM or you can send me a PM on my account. I would love to chat with you. :)



Author's Response:

Probably don't have the time, but thanks for the invite. It's an interesting site you've made.

I left my old stories up for years, but haven't really been on it. My vore girlfriend died of COVID19 just before Christmas, and I'm finding the subject a bit sensitive now. I'm spending most of my chat time these days telling people about the need to turn to Jesus for forgiveness and eternal life. Sin has left this world in a mess, and it's only going to get worse.

But thanks for your friendship and the invitation.

Reviewer: Mr-War Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2021 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL

Is there any chapters you plan on writing that involves a DETAILED roasting of Mouse Man?

Like for example: [Giganta preps Mouse Man on the kitchen table, covering him with oils, herbs and spices, pushes some stuffing inside him till his belly is bulging, stuffs an apple in his mouth and pushes his pan inside the oven.

And detail Mouse Man's cooking from within the oven in his point of view as he (and Giganta) starts to find the smell of his cooking meat quite yummy despite the fact that he is going to be eaten, and by the time Giganta pulls him out of the oven, his skin would be a crispy golden brown and she would be pleased to see that Mouse Man is still alive (but he would barely wiggle because of his cooked muscles).

Once Giganta brings him to her table complete with a fork and carving knife (or Giganta might prefer to dig into Mouse Man with her hands), and Mouse Man would be aware enough to numbly feel Giganta either carving pieces of his cooked body or feel her teeth tear his flesh off like a chicken. Either way, Giganta won't stop eating until all that is left of Mouse Man is a picked clean skeleton.

I think this would technically count as a "Bad Ending" for Mouse Man. LOL]

In a nutshell: Please add DETAILED roasting content wether the giantess eating Mouse Man is Giganta, Wonder Woman or some other heroine/villainess... I spent a little too much time on Eka's Portal. ;P

If you are not familiar with Eka's Portal; it is pretty much a website with LOTS of vore of all kinds from art to stories, soft vore to hard vore and "kinkier" vore. Including Cooking Vore (and LOTS of it). ^_^



Author's Response:

I finished this story about 10 years ago and forgot to mark it as complete.

i always figure put Giganta with a normal sized guy and put Mouse Man with a normal sized woman.

Thanks for Eke's Portal. I had a quick look and may get into it more.

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Date: July 30 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 22: FOUR HEROES AND A DOG

I've always wondered what would've happened if Terry (as Batman or not) had been found shrunken by the green-eyed brunette cheerleader from the Earth Mover episode.*

*Her biological father was mutated by toxic waste, so that he became like a cross between DC's Swamp Thing and Marvel's Sandman.

Author's Response:

I did toy with the idea of having him shrunken and found by Bunny Vreeland (Veronica's daughter, rescued by Bruce/aging Batman in first episode of the Batman Beyond series).

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Date: July 30 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 21: THE INCREDIBLE INQUE-ING MAN

In the immortal words of the late, great Jimmy Durante:

"Inque...a-dinka-doo!
A-dinka-dee! A-dinka-doo!"

Author's Response:

A bit of Inque-idental humour there.

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Date: December 01 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 20: GIRL OF TWO FLASHES

Maybe Iris West could wind up falling in love with Jimmy Olsen?

Author's Response:

That'd make a great older woman relationship!

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Date: December 01 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 19: RIPPLE HUNTER TIME MONITOR

Wouldn't it have been easier to let the Golden Age Flash go forward in time, to the "Final" Crisis, then become the one to end it? Thereby becoming the tachyonic lightning bolt that strikes Barry Allen (while still preserving Garrick's 1945 "death")?

Author's Response:

Btw re your other review, every photographer (like Jimmy Olsen) could do with an IRIS for his camera. LOL.

Now, re this review, that would have been a good idea, but I'm still only really up to 1994 in my reading of DC Comics. My collecting cut off (with a few exceptions) at Zero Hour.

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Date: September 02 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 18: SOLUTION IN THE BOX

The best (genuine) happy ending you could provide for this story. Thanks for sharing it!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the surprise (namely the idea of combining effects of Mother Box and a Lazarus Pit). More later, if I ever think of it.

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Date: September 02 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 17: FUTURE BATMAN FAMILY

YEP! Like Marvel's Asgardians, the inhabitants of Apokolips and New Genesis were just higher-tech, longer-lived alien humanoids who chose to emulate certain cultures of Earth's history.

Author's Response:

Yes, and both created (at least in part) by Jack Kirby.

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Date: August 31 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16: ALLIANCES

Ah, yes! I can see where this is most likely headed.

"And, over here, Mrs. McGinnis, is the shrink ray invented by Superman's enemy Brainiac. Or, rather, an extra-dimensional counterpart thereof, from the planet Mega rather than Krypton."

"How does it work? Do I pull the trigger like a real gun?"

"Wait! Don't touch...!"

"KA-ZAP!"

Only chapter 17 can tell me whether or not I guessed wrong. ;-)

Author's Response:

You're in for quite a surprise then... But only chapter 18 will tell you where it's really going, combining two DC plot devices never before combined by any other writer. 

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Date: October 08 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 15: FOUNDATIONS FOR FANS

In the immortal words of Disney's ever-falling Goofy: "YA-hoo-hoo-hoooey!

Author's Response:

From DC to Disney, in just 15 reviews.

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Date: October 01 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 14: NEVER ON SUNDAY, HOLIDAY GIRL

Personally, I'm for Black Canary. I've often wondered how the Atom would feel being playfully trapped in one of those L'Egg shells she must keep her fishnet stockings in (when wearing her original costume).

;-)

Author's Response:

Yes they do look rather good. Have to give that a thought. In the mean time, chapter one of a new novel, featuring my own characters entirely is going up.

Written and authorized by Timescribe's Plugs Inc.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 14: NEVER ON SUNDAY, HOLIDAY GIRL

Ah! The mixed blessings of time travel. What takes years to do in what we call the present can seem like only seconds in the past.

:-)

Author's Response:

Thank you, just like what takes a minute to read can take hours to write, as you and I know.

Well I'm on a dead end for ideas in this story. So I'll need your vote on whether Ray Palmer-G goes with Wondergirl-M or Black Canary-M before I can take the story any further. It's been two days and I'm still completely blocked for an idea.

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Date: September 29 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 13: DIANA PRINCE MEETS MOUSE LAD

Is Mouse Lad supposed to be a pastiche of Raymond Chow (the current Atom)?

Author's Response:

I'm doing my best to avoid Raymond Choi (Chow, ho ho) in this story. His WW/Giganta stuff has been prevalent in both DC's and my previous work.

Mouse Lad's entirely new. And on the quiet, as I wrote him, I was basically giving Mouse character status to myself, and envisioned myself in the same role. It seemed natural enough to use the double Diana Prince plot from Wonder Woman's golden age origin too.

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Date: September 29 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: DIAL A FOR A-T-O-M

I'm sorry. But, I'm still laughing over Chade the Shaving Man.

BWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Author's Response:

So am I. I knew that one would get you going, and the Crisis of Infinite Beards (related pun of course) seemed the perfect way to deal with DC 1985 and free up Donna Long and Dinah Lance.

Far out. Guess what. I've just created a character of the same marital status and names as one of my own regulars, namely the widowed MRS LONG.

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Date: September 29 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: THE TALE OF MR TODD

This chapter would make a great commercial for a giantesss fast-food place.

"Jason ex-Robin. YUMMMMMMMM!"

Author's Response:

yes, Diana could use Jason and the Golden Floss on her mouth.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: HALL of Justice

He would say: "The Greek gods, being mythological figures, were used strictly as a satirical plot device. And, therefore, should not be taken too seriously. As to the other question? Read the review of chapter nine for the answer."

Author's Response:

Well satire is one of the things we both do best.

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Date: September 27 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: DAYS OF FUTURE FEAST

I don't know: those guys acted more like the Legion of Slapstick Homages. The only one missing was Triplicate Stooge (nyuk-nyuk-nyuk)!

Author's Response:

Well that was basically where I was going with it. I'm glad your nickname abbreviates to LSH.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: DISH OF TWO WORLDS

So, let me see if I got this straight. In that other time-line, Mouseman basically became "rat-atooey?"

Author's Response:

The giant Mouse Man (ie normal sized from our point of view) of earth-G was eaten by the giant Wonder Woman of earth-G (timelines not affected).

The Mouse Man of earth-M (tiny sized from our point of view) was eaten by the previous timeline's version of the Giganta of earth-M (in the past), but rescued from her stomach by the Time Pool recovering him.

This was brought to you by the rodent recap department.

By the way, "rat-atooey". Bwahahhahahahha!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: CHIPS AND DALE

LOL!

Author's Response:

What can I say?

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