Date: September 16 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I see what you mean. I look forward to the next installment whenever you have time for them.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Several things here:
1)Totally called it with the doctor.
2)Very Happy for Gemma and Stamitos
3)Glad to see the friendship with Jenna has ben saved.
4)Did I.C. know about the grandpa link to the tech?
5)Wow, that sucks about Dakota. (and for me because it's cliffhanger.)
Author's Response:
Several responses here
1) Yeah, Dr. Dekker was pretty obvious from a reader point of view. I played with twisting the plot to make it someone else, but just kept coming back to her.
2) Me, too.
3) Me, too.
4) This may sound strange, but that's actually irrelevant. There's a fifth chapter to this installment yet to be posted, and it indirectly addresses that issue. Simply put, since Kellie's a minor, and her mom is her guardian, Gemma actually holds the rights to the tech, at least until Kellie's 18. That's why Gemma's on the board and not Kellie. (Dakota's involvement is explained in it, too.)
5) Yeah, and i don;t know that you're gonna feel any better after the fifth chapter, either ...
BTW, the reason for the delay on the fifth chapter is that I'm on deadline for a paying writing gig; I've got two in the works now, and one's a comic book about a size-changing superheroine. After Chapter 5, there are still two more stories to be told in the Elevator Girl saga. I'll get them posted as I can around the paying gigs.