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Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

You got me with that title and summary.  Good job.

Looks like we're getting closer to the big reveal (as well as critical point with Dakota).



Author's Response:

Your assessment is correct.  (Wow, that sounds formal!)  The ride starts getting wilder from here ...

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