Date: August 09 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
very nice.... i love your work
Date: July 02 2008 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
are you going to write more? you ought to, i want to know what happens to the little dude.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2008 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a really good story. I like the parts when the kid is glued to the chair and gets sat on up and down. I also like the part when the kid gets deep inside and her boyfriend fucks her pushing him further.
I have two qustions tho. 1. Are you going to finish this story or no. 2. I am asking permisson if i could do this story again but from the girls point of view.
Date: April 28 2007 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely done. The descriptive writing painted a vividly erotic picture. The abrupt ending...actually was a nice touch...allowing the readers to finish the story in their own minds. The one improvement I might suggest...instead of starting the story with an explosion in science class lab...perhaps the story could have started as it ended...in mid scene...the explosion, ray gun, new invention, molecular transformation device....I personally could do without the "set-ups" most writers seem to deem important to the story...fact is gts is a fantasy that must remain a fantasy...it doesn't matter how the guy "got shrunk"...any "explanation" will never make the stories "real" . XtMS didn't write a story that a reader had to wade through, (often times halfway through the story)to find what he/she was looking for. Great job XtMS...I've added you to my favorite author list, and hope you continue with your efforts.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2007 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad because giant couples rule, but what became of the little fellow?
[Report This]Date: August 08 2006 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully discriptive and so intriguing. I didn't understand the whole one lined sentences at first but found it to be more of a poem with breaks. And so it turns into a poem of lustful sin... but at the same time love. Dirty little secrets. Love should remain open ended but I think this tale could have had a little more to it. But beautiful piece of work, best I've read yet.
Author's Response: Thank You !
I really enjoyed writing it.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2006 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have not seen a story like this in a while... would like to see this type of theme in a series... (*****)stars
Author's Response: Thank You !
I really enjoyed writing it.