Date: October 02 2012 7:21 PM Title: Dinner
Really loving the older woman plot line
Date: October 02 2012 7:20 PM Title: The beginning
Well I'm keen to see what happens next in chapter 2.
Date: September 06 2012 3:12 PM Title: Aftermath
OK! Serious review, now.
So, they've declared their mutual love. Previously left unsaid so as not to ruin their renewed old friendship. This raises the question, however. Will he be consentually shrunken; or will she shrink him out of maternal possessiveness?
Author's Response: Hmm. A serious review deserves a serious response. You'll have to wait and see as far as the shrinking goes. I'm still debating whether to have him instantly shrink, or slowly shrink. What would you prefer?
I'll try to keep the story updated as often as possible, but as we all know, September is that magical time of year where people return to public education (sad face) so I'll probably only be able to update the story on weekends now.
Date: September 03 2012 5:57 PM Title: Aftermath
ahhhh this is getting good!
Author's Response: It will get better :D
Date: September 03 2012 4:44 PM Title: Aftermath
WHOOP-WHOOP-WHOOP! Emergency! Dive! Dive!
Author's Response: You know it ;P
Date: September 03 2012 1:37 PM Title: Dinner
good story so far
Author's Response: Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: September 02 2012 8:50 PM Title: Dinner
Much better...and much more interesting!
:-)
Author's Response: Thanks. I find that starting off a story is the hardest part. Now that everything is set up, it should get better.
Date: September 01 2012 9:37 AM Title: Dinner
Awesome story. I hope that there will be more.
aaron
Author's Response: Don't worry there most certainly will be.
Date: August 30 2012 11:25 PM Title: Dinner
Really nice story. But I hope we get some action soon.
Dave
Author's Response: Don't worry the action is coming really soon :)
Date: August 30 2012 2:59 PM Title: The beginning
Not bad! Although, the dialogue and narrative need a lot more separation.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I know what you mean. It's just that I'm writing and uploading chapters on my phone because I'm in Seattle for PAX Prime :) So it's a tad hard to get it just right on the phone.
Date: August 29 2012 11:56 PM Title: The beginning
Its a very good start to a story.
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Stay tuned, it will get better.
Date: August 29 2012 9:46 PM Title: The beginning
Interesting. Going kind of fast but I amliking the set up. Love to know more about Karen. Keep this going
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will reveal more about Karen as the story progresses ;)