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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 7:21 PM Title: Dinner

Really loving the older woman plot line

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 7:20 PM Title: The beginning

Well I'm keen to see what happens next in chapter 2.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 3:12 PM Title: Aftermath

OK! Serious review, now.

So, they've declared their mutual love. Previously left unsaid so as not to ruin their renewed old friendship. This raises the question, however. Will he be consentually shrunken; or will she shrink him out of maternal possessiveness?

Author's Response: Hmm. A serious review deserves a serious response. You'll have to wait and see as far as the shrinking goes. I'm still debating whether to have him instantly shrink, or slowly shrink. What would you prefer? I'll try to keep the story updated as often as possible, but as we all know, September is that magical time of year where people return to public education (sad face) so I'll probably only be able to update the story on weekends now.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 5:57 PM Title: Aftermath

 

ahhhh this is getting good!



Author's Response: It will get better :D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 4:44 PM Title: Aftermath

WHOOP-WHOOP-WHOOP! Emergency! Dive! Dive!

Author's Response: You know it ;P

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 1:37 PM Title: Dinner

 

good story so far



Author's Response: Thank you.

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 8:50 PM Title: Dinner

Much better...and much more interesting!

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks. I find that starting off a story is the hardest part. Now that everything is set up, it should get better.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 9:37 AM Title: Dinner

Awesome story. I hope that there will be more.

aaron

Author's Response: Don't worry there most certainly will be.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 11:25 PM Title: Dinner

Really nice story. But I hope we get some action soon.

Dave



Author's Response: Don't worry the action is coming really soon :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 2:59 PM Title: The beginning

Not bad! Although, the dialogue and narrative need a lot more separation.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I know what you mean. It's just that I'm writing and uploading chapters on my phone because I'm in Seattle for PAX Prime :) So it's a tad hard to get it just right on the phone.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 11:56 PM Title: The beginning

Its a very good start to a story.

Dave



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Stay tuned, it will get better.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 9:46 PM Title: The beginning

Interesting. Going kind of fast but I amliking the set up. Love to know more about Karen. Keep this going



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will reveal more about Karen as the story progresses ;)

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