Date: September 28 2012 10:22 AM Title: Game Over
I don't think he did survive, Stub. Only the sliver of duct tape, gagging him, was removed. The rest of him was still wrapped up like an Egyptian mummy when he was dropped! :-(
[Report This]Date: September 28 2012 1:19 AM Title: Game Over
At least he survived; and because he survived that leaves the story open for a sequel. Hopefully he will meet someone nicer...
Date: September 27 2012 5:33 PM Title: Misc.
Love the story, hope to see more.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 1:32 PM Title: Misc.
It was a pleasure reading this. Even if I am still a little wistful that Franky couldn't get a stereotypical happy ending.
Thanks for sharing/posting this!
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 1:26 PM Title: Game Over
Poor Franky! But, I like to think that, even in losing, he won.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 11:04 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
wow thanks for the shout out :) Im just here to give authors encouragement to make great stories like this. Also I loved how the main title was about Liza I never thought it was about her lol but she was the real wild card her actions led to Franks sad Death :(. Im not mad at how he died, I like happy endings but they are harder to write. Drowning sucks but being digested is worse. I cant wait to read your next Story good luck! (FEED ME MORE!)
Date: September 27 2012 9:08 AM Title: Game Over
Eh, it was kind of predictable at the end. You knew they would both turn on him. i was expecting a better payoff at the end. You even tease it at the end with Liza being nervous at the grave site. I thought she might turn on madison at that point, and then either continue with keeping Franky or toss him off as well. His last biting remark seems hollow now because it looks like Liza is Madison's friend now.
Author's Response:
Well yeah, it's easy to tell he wasn't going to get away with mouthing off to them unscathed. But, I don't wanna give too much away to the sequel however, worry not Liza and Maddison's situation won't go unaddressed.
Date: September 27 2012 1:58 AM Title: Curtain Call
I'm hoping he won't get killed. I think they might finally come to thier sense though.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 5:17 PM Title: Curtain Call
First time ever the small man in a story grows BALLS stupid but he spoke the Truth no he will pay. too bad
Author's Response:
Sometimes it's better to be a living sheep than a dead lion. I sure hope Franky saviors that moment though.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 4:35 PM Title: Curtain Call
Well, you could always answer that question with a sequel (hint-hint)!
Seriously, though: that was a terrific final chapter. A shrunken man getting to vent his frustration with no _immediate_ repercussion? Quite refreshing. One might even say "unique!"
I am definitely going to favoritize this. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I figure he should have at least one moment of redemption and lets his tormentors have it big time. After the last chapter, I'll include a brief passage of future plans of stories.
Date: September 26 2012 4:31 PM Title: Curtain Call
It needed to be said.
Author's Response:
It did, I wonder what Maddison and Liza have to say in response.
Date: September 26 2012 4:45 AM Title: Desperate Struggle
I'm starting to think Liza is actually worse than Maddison but it's hard to say exactly who is worse.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 4:37 PM Title: Desperate Struggle
I vote for Liza. Maddison is kind of a bitch lol
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 11:51 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
My prediction is that both of them got caught in the blast. They both fell on each other before the device fired. I call stalemate
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 10:25 AM Title: Desperate Struggle
It looks like, next chapter, some introductions will be in order.
"Shan? Fit. Fit? Shan."
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 10:19 AM Title: Morning Dilemma
Express your gratitude in a more practical way, Liza. Enlarge him, now!!
Author's Response:
I think this is beyond a point of words now.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 1:21 AM Title: Morning Dilemma
I like this! I like this! Lets hope she smart enough to keep the shrink ray with her. All that time being small got to her head lol
Date: September 25 2012 1:07 AM Title: Morning Dilemma
At the begining of the chapter I was inclined to think Frank would end enjoying being shrunk but now I'm not so sure. Maddison will come home and protect Frank I think. Why does't Liza escape with him rather than toying with him in Maddison's house? She could come back home at any time.
Date: September 25 2012 1:07 AM Title: Morning Dilemma
At the begining of the chapter I was inclined to think Frank would end enjoying being shrunk but now I'm not so sure. Maddison will come home and protect Frank I think. Why does't Liza escape with him rather than toying with him in Maddison's house? She could come back home at any time.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2012 6:53 PM Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams
A heaven-sent nightmare seems even more oxymoronic (emphasis on the "moronic"). But, at least he doesn't have to feel guilty about lying to her, now (re: having a bad dream).
Should he feel guilty about telling her he loves her? The jury's still out on that one. ;-)