[Report This]Date: September 05 2012 5:25 PM Title: Alone at Last
Very interesting. Cant wait to see what happens next.
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 05 2012 4:08 PM Title: Alone at Last
Ooooh! A shrunken damsel in distress? That's a rarity, here!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 11:13 AM Title: TLC
I think the ZZZZ's have it.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 2:46 PM Title: Game Time
ok im going to vegas till monday plz for me add like 4ch lol I LOVE THIS STORY! Its going to be a long weekend
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 1:14 PM Title: Game Time
The scariest thing about this little (still more puns!) interaction? Maddison probably really does believe she was being gentle with him!
Talk about self-delusions. :-(
Author's Response:
A sad truth indeed. Franky better think of something before Maddison does something not so gentle ( in her mind).
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 9:15 AM Title: Meet and Greet
Well im fully involved in the story. I Like how u made it gentle and sadistic, I like both writing styles especially when combined. quick question can we find out wht happened to her other "friends"? love the story good luck
Author's Response:
All in good time, Franky will soon fully realize what a dangerous situation he's really in.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 9:05 AM Title: Meet and Greet
I don't suppose that first game will be "Spin the Bottle" (with Franky inside it).
Author's Response:
xD . I dunno, I wonder if Maddison has something more physical in mind.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 8:59 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
As someone who doesn't usually get to the shrinkage until the second or third chapter, of his own stories, I applaud you for being an exception to the general rule. :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah maybe if I get inspiration for future stories I'll put some more set up. But for my first one I wanted to dive straight into the real bulk of it.
Date: August 29 2012 7:39 AM Title: Meet and Greet
Good start, like how you've set it up, this story has a lot of potential, please continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I already have some more chapters pre-written so I just have to type them up. I'll have some more chapters posted within the next couple of days.