[Report This]Date: October 19 2024 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: One different morning
I’m so glad to see another chapter to this all these years later! Please continue.
Date: October 04 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5: Back from school
Update so soon, please! I like your story!
Date: August 18 2022 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Back from school
Love this story.
Date: May 30 2022 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: One different morning
Really enjoyed this and John the small, hope to see more of your work.
Author's Response:
I'm Glad you liked it!
Thank you for your comments
Date: May 30 2022 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: One different morning
Do you do commissions?
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm afraid not. I mean, I'd never thought of it.
But the thing is I don't spend much time writing.
So I don't think I could commit to deliver something in a proper time.
Date: August 26 2020 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Hope this continues.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I don't think I'll continue this Story. It's been so much time.
I've just uploaded a few chapters of another story I wrote 2 years ago.
Although I confess I'm not sure if I will continue that one either
Date: August 29 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: One different morning
Sooooo looking forward to more of this story.
Please continue,
Diesel
Date: May 25 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Hoping you will continue with this story as I am liking it a lot. Always a sucker for a good 'Dominating Mother-In-Law' story.
Review-wise on the technical end; you have a few problems with Punctuation and Grammar but nothing that could not be fixed with a quick 'Read Through/Edit' before posting. The story flows well and keeps me entertained, wanting more as each chapter ends.
Nothing spectacular about Samuel; the typical shrunken victim that we all want to read about on here and other Sites. You've described him well and give him enough feeling that we care about his plight. Love Fanny though!
A truly disinterested Giantess/Goddes swept up in her Power and Authority of her little charge. I enjoy the way you have her torment her son-in-law, seemingly uncaring as to his wants, desires or feelings making her business priority and shunting him into 'Pet' status while under her care. As I have mentioned in other Reviews this is TRULY an Evil Giantess as opposed to those that torture, maim or kill in other stories. Keep the subject miserable for as long as possible and humiliate rather than injure. It's easy to 'CRUSH' the Tiny but hard to keep inflicting psychological wounds. Good job!
Hope to see another chapter soon, Santiago. Been awhile...
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review!
I don´t want to make any vain promeses but i'm planning to take time to write some more the next week.
Date: May 10 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Please continue. Such a well done story.
Thanks,
Diesel
Date: April 13 2016 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
How is the story going?
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: April 01 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Very good.
Continue peppering this story.
More breasts, buttocks, crushing will be fun.
Do not delay to continue.
Date: March 31 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
You think she would of droped him in her breast
[Report This]Date: March 30 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
For an ESL story, this isn't too bad.*
*Thus far. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, what does ESL stand for?
Date: March 30 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Nice chapter!
Fanny is forcing him to admit his smallness. Please, i want more. I can't wait the next chapter! Is he still in pajamas ?
Author's Response:
Thank you
He doesn't have any other shrunken clothes, so... Yes.
Date: March 30 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: One different morning
Yes Ma'am is a sign of respect usually from a younger person to an older lady, or to a female boss at work. You can say it to any lady who you have respect for. Even someone only 10 years older. Just someone showing respect to someone above them in life.
Thanks,
Diesel
Date: March 30 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Nice chapter. I like that Fanny is forcing him to admit his smallness and uselessness.
I like that just as he is saying you can't do this, Fanny closes the drawer further showing she can and that his opinion means nothing. Love her psychology on him. I am voting neighbor.
Love this story,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: March 29 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
She should have put him inside Sophie's underwear drawer. That would be funny.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house
I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 18 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house
Awesome chapter. Love all the things Fanny has done. Really a great chapter. I am surprised that he does not answer her with yes ma'am. He should look up at her when she speaks to him. Well done describing her hand and fingers slowly wrapping him up despite his banging.
Love it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, i really appreciate it. Regarding the "yes ma'am" thing, bear in mind that i am from Argentina and english is not my native language. I am not very familiarized with the term, i have never read it or heard it in any context other than this site and i don't even know how it sounds, for long time i thought that the word "ma'am" stood for "mom / mother" and i realized that it wasn't like that one week ago after reading your previous review and searching the term meaning on internet.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house
I like how callous everyone is with him. Great job!!!