Date: July 04 2013 11:22 AM Title: Prologue
Hi, I read your trilogy of spells and in think one of the best history I´ve read so far, and I´d suggest you to do quarter in which you explain what happend to Jim and Rebecca with their possible relationship, with Sonni and magical book and Daria and the Cover
I´m sorry for the spelling, I´m mexican
Date: August 22 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Heh! Where else, but the MSC, can you save the world and torture shrunken co-workers, at the same time?
Great debut, Steph. Although, I do think Kristov's fate was a litte unfair. Then, again, Jackie's family did have terrorist links (according to the opening chapter). So, it stands to reason she might be a sadistic bully in her own right.
Date: August 22 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, at least Kay gets to dispense some poetic justice before the concluding chapter. :-)
Date: August 22 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gives new meaning to the "Fall of Troy."
;-)
Date: August 22 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Kristov! Without his legs, he won't be able to go "Russian" around, trying to escape.*
*Sorry! I couldn't resist. ;-)
Date: August 22 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
And, a domineering giantess is born!
:-D
Date: August 21 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
If those idiot teenagers had skateboards, but no saftey helmets or limb-pads, then yeah. They definitely deserved to be shrunken and crushed!
;-D
Date: August 21 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is getting better and better. :-)
Date: August 21 2012 3:28 PM Title: Prologue
A most promising opening chapter.*
*For something slightly similar, might I recommend "M.A.C.H.O. Tales?"
;-)
Date: August 21 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, sir! Very promising, indeed. :-)