Date: May 22 2018 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
So, late review, but I want to say that this is, overall, excellent. My one complaint was with one of Marissa's reactions, namely to eating someone.
For a 7-year-old, it was a very adult reaction. It was how I'd imagine a young adult, like a 20 year old reacting to it. I feel a more childish reaction would be to wonder if she could just pick the person out of her poop, A-OK, then immediately move to grossing herself out at the thought of it.
Conversely, the children in the final chapter were handled very well, they acted their age. It was a great finish.
That was all for complaints, I just want to thank you for having younger giants, they're far too few I find.
Good stuff, thanks for sharing!
Date: November 22 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the sequel
[Report This]Date: July 16 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great story, I cannot believe I havn't read it. Your work is always amaizing. Cannot wait to read your next story. Hope there is another sequel.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, this is the guy who loved the ending of your first story so much he reviewed it twice. Yeah, I will admit it, I have been a fan of your work ever since Party Time. This return of my arguably favorite all-time protagonist from this site was met with much mental fanfare, and you delivered here. Since I was unable to review this story during it's writing, I'll just review the full thing here. The switch-off between gentle, ympathetic giantess with cruel master who taught the giantess from the first story herself was flawless and brilliant, as I can enjoy a gentle story almost as much as what Brenda indulged in. Plus all those times Brenda tried to get Marissa to "come to the dark side" were the magni opi of the story, brilliant vore scenes that mixed soft and hard, willful and unaware in a quilt of swallowy goodness. The bug fight at the end was definitely an unexpected pleasure, insect interaction is something you'd expect but rarely get from a genre that is all about being shrunk. My only complaint is that your second story also ended with the main giantess being shrunk and given to another giantess (Gloria shrunk and given to Sarah in 1 and Brenda shrunk and given to Marissa in 2), which kinda seems a bit cliche. Not a real big deal, just a little personal peeve. I am glad however that you didn't have Marissa suddenly change charater and acta ll violent just to kill Brenda off. In total, Kickyou, what you have here is a masterwork, Now I beseech you to answer this humble gts fiction author's plea: Oh mighty Kickyou, will you answer the yearing of your readers and give us a third installment of Mike-and-giantess literary excellence?
Date: December 19 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Godly story man, great sequel from the previous story. Please excuse me as I add an alternate ending for Brenda, hopefully not to evoke any hard feelings.
(Starting from Marissa receiving Brenda)
With that, Marissa picked up Brenda by her arms and popped her on her slippery tongue. Already starving, Marissa swallowed her sister without hesitation for the grudge from her mistreatment. Brenda screamed in horror as she traveled through the air landed on her own little sister’s tongue and down her throat into Marissa’s stomach in almost immediate action. Karma, her repeated acts of trying to get Marissa to obliviously eat others turned against herself as a victim. Marissa sat back on the couch in satisfaction as she heard a faint scream traveling down her throat and into her stomach. Marissa smiled sweetly and patted her stomach as she let out a small belch.
“Excuse me.” Marissa chuckled and lied down, “Aren’t you glad sis, now we will be together, forever.”
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can you do more with Marrisa please? And more mike?
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!!!!Great ending!!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is there more to come from the adventures of Mike? or is their more with Diana and Brenda? wht ever you do im sure it will be great!
Author's Response:
Sorry posted kind of late forgot to make it completed, and named Marissa Diana by accident
[Report This]Date: September 26 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
wht kind of kid picks up a spider to watch it battle, tht shit is scary lol. I would of found a pincher bug not a freaking spider. srry for the rant lol great to see the story back :)
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Cant wait to see what happens now!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love where this is going, eager to see more.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good job. Also I have an idea. In about 3 chapters have Mike return to Sarah. Then have them capture and kill Brenda. After that have Mike and Sarah adopt Marissa
[Report This]Date: September 13 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Kind of saw this coming but a heroic journey is nothing without peril.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good stuff my good man.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Real life takes priority my friend! I don't mind waiting as long as the updates are as good as this one!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
that sucks lol. don't worry it will be hard but this is well worth the wait. thanks for the headsup
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
1st attempt escape plans rarely work. u writers can be very sadistic lol
[Report This]Date: August 26 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
great addition keep it going. every addition builds to the characters except for Mike thats because we all know hes been through hell for yrs. That makes him a great character
Date: August 24 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
is that unwilling pred i sense coming? :D