Date: July 30 2019 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm sorry to say but that was another bad ending. At first she didn't want to kill him and now after a few insults that are completely understandable you just change her personality at the tip of a hat. Peoples attitudes don't change that much and if she was actually thinking about him during their relationship one mistake wouldn't have change anything, if she was that dedicated she would have called the other girl and told her to fuck off instead of killing her boyfriend.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
i like this a lot, keep going
[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was a pretty good read. I always liked the idea of vengeful girlfirend and this turned out pretty well. The only real gripe I have was that the humilulation he went through wasn't described in a bit greater detail.
However, i still enjoyed the read. Looking forward to your next tale.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this but i only wish it could have lasted longer, her play with him and get really down and dirty. Would love to see something simualer again with a more voyuer and putting him in her panties. Maybe attaching him to her friends panties, just something to have kept it going alittle longer.
Really enjoyed it though so i hope to see another story like it.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow amazing ending. I honestly cant think of better ending
[Report This]Date: August 12 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I reall like this. Sometimes I wish things like this could really happen. If they could I would volunteer to be shrunk.
Great story. Keep it going
Dave