[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: Jill
This is my favorite of your rightly celebrated series, it gives a good variety of middle aged giants with different aspects of the foot fetish as well. With her faux-friendly but inescapable personality Jill has been my favorite of all your characters, but I've always wondered what she looks like! Can you elaborate please?
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Interesting you say Jill is your favorite; I can't say I've ever heard anyone say that. I realize I didn't really talk much about their appearances in this story since it's mostly about Scott being at their feet. I imagined her with brunette shoulder-length hair and of somewhat average build, maybe with just a little extra meat on her bones but by no means overweight, and green eyes. And she frequents spas for her hands and feet.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Jill
Hottest footjob ever!
Author's Response:
I'm sure Scott would disagree. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nancy
Any chance we'll see Carolyn again?
Author's Response:
Definitely a chance, I'm just not sure when.
Date: October 12 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)
Nice story, you should follow up on this.
Author's Response:
I intend to. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Somehow, I forgot to review this back when you were originally writing it. That's unfortunate, because I really enjoyed this story a lot.
I absolutely loved the descriptions of the different women, and I felt that the experiences with each one was unique. Feet are somewhat difficult to describe, yet you handled it so effortlessly. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks, littlemac, always a pleasure hearing from a fellow author I respect as much as you.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)
I really liked that chapter. I was hoping we would get to see his mothers reaction to how badly Susan had beaten him. Susan was worse than all the other ladies combined. I really liked it a lot.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)
loved the sequel. Maybe a new idea for you would be a a short story on each of the 4 women mentioned in this story? I'd like to find out what happens to Scott and the feet of Susan!
Author's Response:
i'll certainly consider it since these stories are short. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)
I would love a sequel to this story A++ work.
Author's Response:
gracias
[Report This]Date: August 19 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)
Oops sorry. 5 stars !
Date: August 19 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)
Master class. How to make such unrealistic scenarios enjoyable? You have combined believable characters with intriguing action. This is a true pleasure to read. Rarely do I comment, but this is superb work. Stop the story if you must, but do not abandon this genre.
Author's Response:
thank you for the review! i do enjoy this genre a lot, so i'll probably be coming back to it eventually
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)
That was gooood!!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)
Cant wait for the last chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nancy
This is a short story? You could have the games go on and on, with the 5 different women in the story! Absolutely love it so far.
Date: August 16 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Awesome! Really enjoyable short. Looking forward to the finale!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
alot of fun like the first one, keep going
[Report This]Date: August 15 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
I usually love your stories. But this one seems like the same thing over and over. Good story but not great.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks for your honesty, although with due respect, i think you may have gone into the story with the wrong expectations; this is more of a short, single genre-focused story as opposed to my longer ones that include more variety
[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Carolyn
Shaping up to be a great story. I hope that Scott gets to spend some more time with Jill, after his turn with the other women, of course.
Date: August 12 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2: Jill
This was a fantastic chapter, but it is looks alot like a repeat of Chapter 1. With several women in this story they should each find a different way to punish him. Otherwise, it is just repeating the same situation over and over. Each woman is unique, so they should be able to use different body parts to torment him in new ways during their meeting.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Jill
Great chapter. Looking forward to more footplay!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Very good! I've always liked the Mother/son scenario in shrinking stories and yours falls right in and is done very well. On the other hand I have never really been a fan of stories that gather huge groups of women (the soccer team, the cheer-leading squad, etc.) to abuse the tiny. The Book Club however is a good touch, taking each woman in turn in each chapter. Looking forward to more and thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. i too am not really a fan of stories that gather a group of women soley to abuse the shrunken, so i'm trying to emphasize that this is a book club that the mother is taking advantage of to punish her son as an added bonus rather than unrealistically inconveniencing a group of people just for that