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Date: August 21 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

I guess her Skechers are about to become "Scrunchers." LOL!

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Date: August 21 2012 10:43 AM Title: The Other Woman

I'd certainly love it, if Katie exercised while wearing an Old School black leotard with matching tights!

;-D

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Date: August 16 2012 1:17 PM Title: New World

Chris sounds like a real glutton for punishment. ;-)

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Date: August 15 2012 11:42 PM Title: Biography

i like it, fun stuff :)

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Date: August 15 2012 4:38 PM Title: Fantasies Come To Life.

Giggling, huh? That's not a bad sign. And, at least Vanessa made a cameo appearance (if only in his dreams).

Author's Response:

You are going to be seeing more Vanessa dream sequences. 

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Date: August 10 2012 10:32 AM Title: The Mistake

Four words, Chris: closed-circuit video surveillance.*

*LOL! What a d-----s!

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Date: August 10 2012 10:27 AM Title: Biography

wow a character with a believable thought process nice intro dude

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Date: August 09 2012 7:40 PM Title: Biography

You post the second chapter; I'll be here to read and review it. :-)

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Date: August 09 2012 1:44 PM Title: Biography

Not a bad opener. Will Vanessa be making a more major appearance, later on?

Author's Response: Sorry. Vanessa is in a different state. I hope this doesn't detract you from reading the story.

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