Date: October 18 2018 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Quarter of an Inch
I'm glad Emily is not completely heartless.
Date: October 18 2018 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: Working out
At least she feels guilty, its a start..I hate cruelty amongst the macrophilia fetish.
Date: June 03 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Evolve is not the right word for this. Devolve is much more appropriate.
Date: January 05 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Quarter of an Inch
been waiting forever on the continuation
Date: October 01 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
@tinyman91. I look forward to it. Your other story was good too. People have family members and the interactions and feelings seem believable.
Yes, I prefer them being larger. At a quarter inch he is just a speck and so vulnerable. He needs a lot of support from his family or he will go insane at that size. You can't even see his facial features anymore, he is just a bug now.
Date: September 23 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
One more thing: Emily is 6ft 5 inches?! God thats huge! I think she'd be able to pick on Gabriel even if he were normal sized!
Author's Response:
Yes, she would've dwarfed him even if he would've shrunk later in life, mostly due to the fact that he really wouldn't have grown above 4ft tall since he would never hit what would normally be a growth spurt to us.
Date: September 23 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Quarter of an Inch
I hope Emily treats him right. I get that she has a bit of a playful mean streak in her but hes been through a lot, especially after what happened recently. Im surprised that he took it so well, most people would be more stressed out, maybe even be untrusting of others for a time...
Author's Response:
Don't worry she won't be super mean to him, just playful. As for the incident he's used to it at this point in his life, and just simply accepts it as part of life.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Quarter of an Inch
What a super scary experience this must be for this family. Quarter of an inch. A mother and sister who must watch their son/brother disappear to certain death. Exciting. Will Gabriel be saved and at least be allowed to be 7 inch tall or will he vanish completely?
Author's Response:
I take it you prefer the tinies being a little larger than what he is now, anyway, he will not get any smaller than what he is now, as for being bigger in general, you'll just have to read the story and find out how Project Regrowth has come along.
Date: September 22 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Quarter of an Inch
Brilliant,glad you decided to update and its going to be even more fun now that Gabriel is close to microscopic!
Author's Response:
Haha, and I'm glad you're enjoying his new perspective.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Just in Time for Lunch.
Keep those chapters coming, I love how this story is unfolding.
This was rather a short chapter. Luckily for Gabriel he was released from Dorci very soon. I thought you were gonna get her get away with kidnapping him. And that Emily had to go on a rescue mission.
If Dorci is known for kidnapping several boys and men... why isn't she in juvy? It makes me wonder what her previous exploits were.
I like the relationship between Gabriel and Emily. I commented on GTScity that it was borderline incest in the beginning of the story.
But now Emily has come to maturity I guess. She really loves her brother... like a brother. I hope there won't be any improper behavior between the two of them. (But you are free to do as you like.) It would be nice to have a gentle GTS story, where the GTS is the sister.
Storing her brother between her boobs... well... okay, guess that's acceptable. More practical I guess. :D
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for the well thought out, and king review. There will be a few moer...sexual moments between Gabriel, and Emily, but the incidents will be more accidental than on perpous on either parties.
Date: July 08 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Just in Time for Lunch.
Glad to see this story is still going! Curios to see how the Mom's cure goes and more interaction between the siblings
Author's Response:
Well mom's not on the cure thing anymore, but she might still do some experimenting. :) We'll see.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: Into the Bowels of Dorci
Love the story. You have great skil. You are one of my top favorite writers right there with emmagear. Hope you continue this story again soon.
Author's Response:
Writing the next chapter, should have it posted soon.
Date: May 16 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Love the story, I love how the little men still have an "equal" place in society. Do you plan on continuing?
Author's Response:
Yes, I just didn't really feel the need to do so, since nobody has really been giving me any reviews.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Things Take a Turn for the Worst.
Great chapter. Really like this story and the characters are very believable. I don't know what's gonna happen next and I like that. Also the details are very good as well as the dialog.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you for the first real review I've gotten for this story. ^_^
[Report This]Date: November 24 2012 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Back to school
I'm really enjoying how this is turning out. An I can't wait to read what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it, I'll post the next chap soon.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 7: Back to school
Pretty good story. Thanks for continuing it.
To make it better, you should give it some direction and add more action. It's beginning to meander a little.
Author's Response:
I've got the direction set, as for the action gotta build up to it even if it takes awhile to get there. I'm sorry if it's not smutty enough for you, but that's not my writing style.
Date: November 23 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Back to school
Wow, that's some cliff hanger, cannot wait for the next chapter! Well written story, you do good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you, cliffhangers are a specialty of mine. And I'm glad taht you enjoy my work and the next chapter will be out soon.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 6: Trials Denied
thx for updating good ch. glad u are ok
Author's Response:
Yep, and thanks for your concern.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5: Will, you come with me?
I'm really enjoying this so far. The real affection displayed between brother and sister is so nice to see. Of course, me being me I'd love to see him get squashed a little under his mom's butt, but this is still fun.
Author's Response:
Sorry, not going to be a whole lot of interaction with mom, and the little I do, do, will be hand helds and in the like.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: Will, you come with me?
whens next time?
Author's Response:
When I write the next chapter. ^_^