Date: September 06 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4: Gabriel's Answer.
i really like your writing style please continue :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, and it shall continue, soon as I figure out how I want the next chapter to go.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: Gabriel's Answer.
love it hope this continues regularly
Author's Response:
It will continue.
Date: August 25 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: Working out
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue i really like the emotion mix you add to your stories please don't stop
Author's Response:
I haven't stopped, I've just been trying to figure out where I want the story to go, I know how I want it to end, but I don't yet know how I want to get there.
Date: July 30 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Love it. LOVE IT!!
I really enjoy your story so far, Mr. tinyman.
I just want to know, how far is Emily planning to go with her little big bro? Is she going to get naughty?
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and see.
Date: July 26 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Hmmmm...Once Emily finishes her workout, both of them will need a shower. Being his size, Gabe could be used as her bar of soap. What do you think?
Author's Response:
We'll see, it all depends on if the story leads that way.
Date: July 25 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Great Start! The frequent size comparisons (feet, breasts, etc.) made by putting Gabe close to Emily's body only emphasizes her complete dominance over him. Keep it up! As brother and sister, incest should be avoided, so the continuous torture angle is perfect. Men may have some rights in this world, but at one inch tall they can still be easily controlled, humiliated and used like objects by women. I can't wait to see what happens next in Gabe's struggle.
Author's Response:
lol Well, the incest thingi s going to be more incidental, than actual incest meaning the two are only going to love each other as brother and sister, and nothing beyond that. I am glad that you're enjoying the story, and thank you for taking the time to give me some feed back.
Date: July 24 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: World History
It looks like Emily is more fond of her shrunken brother then what their mother realizes. I wonder if he's more fond of her then he admits as well. I can't say I envy him being farted on and the whole being blood relatives would be very uncomfortable but at least he gets a good show each morning.
Now does Emily really work so hard at keeping in shape because she wants to atttract a guy and be a cheerleader or does she like putting on a show for her brother? From the way she's acting it seems she likes his attention and it may actually serve as a motivator. Would she still exercise as much if he wasn't there to look at her or end up stuck on her body?
It's also a nice change of pace that at least in the introduction the men of your setting still have some basic rights unlike in so many stories. As far as education. Do the men tend to focus more on the professions that is mostly mental work? I can't help but think there would be some men in the medical field to perform procedures that require a supremely delicate touch.
Author's Response:
For your first remark, neither is fond of the other that much, it's mostly just little sister torturing her older brother.
The first question, no she works out hard, because she likes it, as far as her brother is concerned it's another way to torture him, as I explained at the begining of the story.
As for the second, they pretty much live as normally as possible, so yea tiny doctor's, lawyers, etc.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: World History
Gabriel Pequeño... I C WAT U DID THAR.
Author's Response:
@_@ You do....now you must die!