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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it, but you really need to split the separate chapters. Having just as one chapter isn't ideal, and when I came back to read it I lost my place because the single chapter is so long.

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