I know you'll probably never see this, and it seems like you don't usually respond to reviews anyway so I'll certainly never know if you saw this, but I just have to say that I really loved this story......until the ending. Firstly, from a fetishistic standpoint, I found it to be a massive turn-off when Gloria was suddenly the one being tortured (and partially by a male giant, no less, without the Giant tag or size roles to warn of this- IMO the Couples tag really wasn't enough of a warning by itself), and from a plot standpoint, it just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story. Yes, in theory it would be cathartic to watch her go through all that, but with this being more of a fetishistic story where some people might 'like' Gloria, for lack of a better word (what I mean is, with this being a violent giantess story, a lot of readers want the giantess to remain dominant and aren't really interested in seeing her receive comeuppance), as opposed to more of a plot-based tale where most people would actually root against the villain, that just didn't really mesh well with the rest of the story: to me, it seemed like a failed attempt to shoehorn in a happy ending just for the sake of having one, when it felt like one simply didn't belong there. Now, I'm not saying that having a happy ending in a violent giantess story is necessarily a bad thing, but in this case I don't think one should have happened-at least, not at that point in the story. On top of that, the execution just felt off, with several important plot elements appearing suddenly and making little sense (1. It's a little too convenient that Gloria's power just happens to come from such an easily accessible source, 2. There was really no reason for Gloria to spare Sarah, and plenty of reasons NOT to, and 3. If all it took to shrink people was a spell, Gloria could've easily shrunken both the protagonists even when she herself was tiny, especially when it's shown that she doesn't actually need the book itself to do so). I know that I'm asking for a lot from a fetish writer as far as "plot holes" and that goes, while simultaneously essentially saying that fetish stories don't always need a ton of plot, but this just bothered me to the point where I felt the need to say something about it.

I don't want to leave a star rating, as 1. A decent amount of my disapproval of the ending stems from my personal tastes (which I can't really judge you or anyone else on), and 2. I don't want to taint the story's image for new readers, but I'd give it about 7/10 overall........which, again, really sucks to say when I enjoyed most of it so much.

Author's Response:

Well thanks for leaving a review.  I know not everyone likes happy endings and not everyone likes bad endings.  I wanted to mix it up a little since I did a couple of 'bad ending' stories before hand.  I'm glade you liked the story up till the end.

good story. loved the ending and the revenge that little bitch finally got. yeah, i say you should definitely make more stories like this =)

The girl is way, way, way too young.  I can't be the only one a little disturbed by a 10 year old featured in what is essentially pornography.

I loved the previous stories better, this one was alright.  I hope you continue making stories, your really good!

I felt like it was a fitting ending. Hope to see more stories from u in the future

hoping that you start the story up again with new characters. it's not all that common that someone as young as gloria (in the beginning) is a predator. they usually end up as prey. as such, i would probaby like to see a new pred around her age.

he has to be dreaming! mikes life sucks, if its real then that would be the first good thing to happen in the story! I say take revenge on the evil Bi$#h! excuse my language LOL

I have been reading this story from the first post really good. I kinda want to voice that I think Sarah should have lived too so she would have a sort-of-permenant slave couple, but I think since in the way you potray Mike's relation to the newer "players" keeping Sarah alive would have canceled out your nice lone-uncaring-veteran-survivor-who-has-given-in-to-playing-eternally-for-his-giantess effect. I love to see you are making a "second beggining" and am looking forward to see how you play out her shrinking her prospective boyfriend. And to the new victims, I am only going to say this Hunger Games (which this is a gts version of in some parts in my humble opinion) parody: May the odds be NEVER in your favor lol!

or not.... thought this story was over glad you continued.=>#2 BEGIN!!

Enjoying this! Looking forward to the next game!