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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

It was alright, and some parts made me chuck, well the way you described some things, but next time please separate the story into individual chapters. It will make it a lot easier to read.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2007 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I deducted one point for a slight trivia blooper. "Lisa" was the charcter Vanessa Angel played on WEIRD SCIENCE: THE SERIES. "Megan" was her character's name on BAYWATCH.

Otherwise, a top-notch pastiche. :-)

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