Reviews For Miss Smith
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 10 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
While I enjoyed the story it does seem a bit unrealistic. I'm pretty sure they would have phoned his parents becase I'm certain they are a bit suspicious by now. There are some grammar/structural issues but it's not too bad. Not sure how the aliens will fit in though.
Reviewer: Vito Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2007 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: March 06 2007 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent so far, still waitingfor the continued to be.
Reviewer: SelfTaughtArtist Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2006 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: October 29 2006 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
great plz complete it its awsome