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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

This chapter was amazing. It's great because now she knows he finds her very attractive and I think that it's making her feel very happy an probably somewhat giddy. Also liked that he didn't just blow his load on the hand of a beautiful woman he just met. An I can't wait to see where you take the next chapter.

aaron
Ps are her feet an toes as well taken care of as her hands an finger nails? An what color are her nails?

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic Story!!!

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Date: June 25 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

Fantastic story!!!!!!

Reviewer: XxDoopexX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Your doing a great Job, I wouldn't mind you taking time to develop Alice's character more. If I were writting the story I would make Davids shrinking slow and subtle changes from the looks of thinks he isn't having any trouble staying where he is.  This is looking to be one of my favorite stories so far keep it up.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story is fantastic. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. I absolutely love these characters.

aaron

Reviewer: dycemist Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter! It has nice development, and you're doing a great job of secluding the characters. I'm looking forward to the next one.

And one other thing, you update very quickly! Some authors take days for short chapters, but you get new ones up in hours! Good on you. 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

You are doing wonderful :)))

Reviewer: Hollow Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I definetely like the setting, and i'm excited to see where this story goes!

-Jake

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your writing is impressive, hope you plan on updating this a lot!

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for making another story! I really liked 'Close'. :)

This one had a very interesting start, I'm very curious to see what will happen to him.

Reviewer: dycemist Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great start to this story. You've picked a great secluded setting, and I'm excited to see what comes next!

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