Reviews For The Gilded Cage
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Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

Okay, two questions:
1) Why doesn't Lucy wear any clothes?
2) What do the characters look like?

*great story, by the way!

Author's Response:

The descriptions in this story were intentionally left as essentially 'blank canvasses' so the reader could apply their own ideals to the characters as they read it :)  It was an experiment i tried out as i sometimes felt that when you have too much description for too many characters it just becomes a confusion of mental images...

The experiment seems to have failed given the feedback i've had from people on the lack of description being a negative point to the story, so its not something i will be repeating.

 

Lucy doesn't wear clothes because she is a pet. As the story points towards from the get-go, she is considered sub-human and giving her clothes would be considered rediculous like dressing a hamster or a mouse.

 

hope this goes some way towards explaining for you, and i'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story ^_^  Thanks for dropping me a note.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

Oops, sorry Em, I always forget to rate! Thanks again for the great story :)

 



Author's Response:

hehe thats ok :)  Thanks for sticking with me despite all my unplanned hiatuses!

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

This was a great read i enjoyed this story from start to finish. I was just re-reading your first chapter just the other day so i was quite overjoyed to see this posted in its entirety. 

This was written beautifully and had a unique story. I hope to read more stories for you. 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the comment/rating, glad you enjoyed the read! I think this has been my favourite story to date, definately fanned my desire to do more :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

I'm stunned! A story by you that the villainess doesn't win :P Never saw that coming but to tell you the truth, I actually felt bad for Lucy so I'm glad she didn't get smooshed. Of course the wretch I am, I was thoroughly enjoying the scene while Emma was crushing the cage *sheepishly looks at the floor*. 

Loved the ping pong scene too, and the scene where Lucy set up Emma, funny :) Awesome story! Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

hahaha :P  I was very deliberate in my attempts to throw off the norm for this one. I wanted to keep people guessing.

 

The scene of emma stomping the cage was the -entire- basis of this story. It started out as just that idea that i worked around so i'm glad you enjoyed it as much as i did ;)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

 

WTF it ended good for Lucy! Im shocked lol I knew someone had to get crushed. Im glad to see a somewhat gentle side to the stories end. glad u finished the story. I love all your stories and cant wait for the next one.:) Damn your good



Author's Response:

hehe thanks very much for the reviews :)  i have a number of stories in the works so i wont be gone as long as i was last time. Thanks for the compliments!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 2:30 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

 

come back to us! in need more lol



Author's Response:

haha :D  i'm coming back either tonight or tomorrow, i'm about a page and a half away from finishing the second half of this, which will be posted shortly after finishing :D   Thanks for your support!! :)

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 6:46 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

Awesome start to what I imagine will be a very fun story! Condescension is so hot, and you do it very well.



Author's Response:

hehe i love condesention and humiliation :)  Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jojomojo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 10:57 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

Right alot more i can tell this story is gonna be good

Author's Response:

haha, i will ^_^  I'm realy enjoying this one :)  Thanks for taking the time to rate!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 5:42 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

Despite the fact that this will eventually get more violent, it's rather refreshing to read a chapter about a giantess that has a pet tiny person in a cage and DOESN'T constantly abuse them in every way possible.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Now you make me feel guilty that its gonna turn dark >.<   I dont normally like Gentle scenarios... i just can't find a conclusion to them that actually works without leaving it completely open-ended. But maybe one day I will find something. Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 5:28 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

 

wow i love where this is going to go. your stories always get me excited!



Author's Response:

Haha, i'm glad ^_^  Thanks for taking the time to comment! The next part will be up soon

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 3:52 PM Title: Ceri's Little Pet

OMG! A new story from HarelequinEms! One of my all time favorite authors, cant wait to see how this story unfolds, you've set up the first chapter very nicely. And of course, knowing your stories the way I do, Lucy is not going to like Emma very much! Life isn't going ot be so gentle anymore.

 



Author's Response:

hehehe, yep, you got that right ;)  I'm really happy you enjoy my stories so much ^_^  It means a lot to me to hear when people are fans of my writing. If you're interested i have just set up a DeviantArt with some pics i've done as well : http://harlequinems.deviantart.com/

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