"I therefore expect she was a sociopath." - I quite liked this line. I have nothing against reading outside my preferred genres. I'm curious to know what you'll do with the giant man thing, and you seem to be doing fairly well so far. It was interesting to see that the guy is only 19. Makes you wonder what influenced him to persue his interest in science. A mentor maybe? Or probably just a way to justify his actions.

When you switched to the report, there was no change from Sally's dialogue. Whilst I do apologise for the "Cody didn't stand up." incident, which I still feel like an idiot for. I would suggest that when you start the report, maybe change the font to Italics so that the reader knows that Sally's reading the report.

The weight was pretty tame. Looking forward to the bunsen burner. I'm guessing that this guy is doing tests similar to Bruce Banner? Test the extremeties of the fight or flight reaction in terms of self preservation?

I'm rambling now. I'm sorry.

Lastly.

If 'Charmed' does get a third chapter, the harrassment will not stop.

Next I'll be asking for you to try out my favourite genre, or to at least incorporate it somewhat in a story.

Thornton.