[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow great story. I like how it is progressing.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: June 13 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great erotic read, though I have to wonder why men are sent to school at all - certainly not for learning? ;) We will see!
Author's Response:
Definitely not for learning :)
[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this story keeps getting better. The story and characters are developing nicely, and the world you placed them in is perfect for a story like this.
My only complaint is your cliffhangers make me want to read the next right away, I need the next one now :p
Author's Response:
I do use cliffhangers quite a bit. Thanks for reading and reviewing dycemist!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
i'm not too into feet, yet this is a truly enthralling and thrilling read!
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad you're willing to give it a shot.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it, it has a good pace and a nice storyline! Hoping to read more soon. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading a leaving a review! I appreciate the feedback.
Date: June 13 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it, it has a good pace and a nice storyline! Hoping to read more soon. Thanks!
Date: June 13 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm a big fan Littlemac and this looks like it's going to be very cool.
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you so much for reviewing, hope you like this one as much as my others.
Date: June 12 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it. Very intersting that women are getting bigger each generation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
The history of this is very interesting, I almost thought that it was gonna be like the batman episode were he couldn't read any of the books cause it was a dream. But this is way better. In incredibly interested in seeing where this goes from here.
aaron
Author's Response:
This is definitely not a dream :) Thanks for the compliment!
Date: June 12 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
A very enlightening chapter. Like BlueDream, I'm also reminded of "After the Apple Fell," even though men maintained a greater sense of equality in that story, both in numbers and in treatment.
Interesting how you mention that women desire size in this world, unlike in our reality. I can't quite figure out why a woman's height isn't considered a desired or desirable trait by most people the same way it is with men. It'll be interesting to see how much the women here differ in that regard.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment, "Apple" was a classic!
As far as the height thing goes, most women I've talked to that are well over 6 feet tall feel "awkward" about it, which was what I was trying to refer to. In this alternate reality, extreme height has become a status symbol, and is therefore not as awkward, but desired. I probably could have stated that more clearly in the story.
Date: June 12 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see you writing again! I'm enjoying this so far. Among the few NewWorldOrder stories that I really like, this one reminds me of the good old 'After the Apple fell' by CLH. :) I'm very curious about where this is going.
Date: June 10 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing. When will the next chapters be posted?
Author's Response:
I'll try to post every few days or so. Thank you for reading!
Date: June 05 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
By the tags there is in place is something going to happen bewteen him and his mom?
Author's Response:
Probably not.
Date: June 04 2012 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
In this world, are school classes separate or co-ed? Some subjects like math and science might be reserved for females-only, but other subjects like home economics (how to care for and feed your male) would have to be co-ed. A co-ed gym class might be interesting for the height, weight and strength comparisions. Females would easily dominate the class and could use males like objects and free weights for their own fitness. Males would lose and be totally humiliated in all physical competitions against women, but each side would learn about their place in the society.
Author's Response:
While technically co-ed, the alternative reality Dean wakes up in has a significantly reduced male population. The audience will find out more as the story developes.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great job! Just can u make him a bit smaller. Can like the woman change the men's size. Because if he was about 6 or 3 inches it would be a bit better because they could do more stuff to him. But besides that it is very good.
Author's Response:
While it's true that more can be done with that scale, I wanted to try something a bit different in regards to size. You will find later that there is a great deal of disparity in the size of the women, so hopefully I can somewhat deliver what you're looking for. Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting turn of events. Can't wait to see what happens now at school, or what will happen if he does decide to indeed skip..
Can't believe how quick you've updated this so far. Keep up the great work.
aaron
Date: June 03 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if there are just as many men as women, but that most of the men are cooped up at home. Sure, there are “doggy doors” between the rooms of the Dean’s house, but was there one to the outside, or are men only meant to go out with a female escort? Dean might have it pretty good for a man of this world in that his family even lets him go to school, considering that so many girls in our world are denied that opportunity. Of course, while these girls are learning reading, writing, and arithmetic, these boys may just be learning to know their place in society.
Date: June 03 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if there are just as many men as women, but that most of the men are cooped up at home. Sure, there are “doggy doors” between the rooms of the Dean’s house, but was there one to the outside, or are men only meant to go out with a female escort? Dean might have it pretty good for a man of this world in that his family even lets him go to school, considering that so many girls in our world are denied that opportunity. Of course, while these girls are learning reading, writing, and arithmetic, these boys may just be learning to know their place in society.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2012 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
His sister seems kinda crazy...
Author's Response:
She's not crazy, she just picks on him a lot :)
Date: June 03 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start! Breastfeeding of all males is the right way to go because it enphasizes the control of women over men. If males can only consume breastmilk, then they are totally dependent on all women and easier to control. In a society where all males are the size of pets or infants, there would have of be all kinds of male-only "rules". Things like special foods (breastmilk), transportation (cages or car seats) and classes (obedience training) would naturally exist. Of course, special punishments would also exist for males who did not behave. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
You'll probably like what I've got planned then :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!