[Report This]Date: July 12 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please keep this going. My favorite story
[Report This]Date: July 12 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Now I'm really really looking forward to the next chapter! I like Ms. Bianchi. :))
Date: July 06 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sweet, sexy and very, very naughty! Love it!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't get enough of your stories dude, they're AMAZING!! Keep up the good work! When I read your stories, it's like reading abook, like I get fully absorbed in it and visualize myself in the world which wouldn't be possible if you didn't have a great writing style. You have great pace by not having too much or too little in a chapter, a good vocabulary with a word or two that I haven't heard of before which is a good sign of an intelligent vocabulary, abd I love the narrative and how it's different than your other stories while still being similiar enough to captivate my attention! Great Job! My only critiscism is that in the first few chapters some of the descriptions used repeated adjectives that you had previously used in preceeding chapters and by all means that is not a major problem, if a problem at all, just a little something that I noticed.
Author's Response:
Hey thank you for the in depth review, and I'm super glad you're enjoying the story. I'll try to police the "repeat adjectives" as more chapters come out :)
Date: June 22 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Will there be any of his male friends from his reality? I saw you included another female from his former world, but I'm curious to see if there is anyone who shares his plight.
Author's Response:
Probably not. A key aspect of the psuedo reality is that the male population is dramatically reduced, so it changes a lot of things (ex. Ms. Bianchi isn't married anymore, as there aren't enough men to go around). This concept will be expanded upon as more chapters come out.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Once again, your work is a shining example of just how much more appealing fetish lit can be when you have 3D character personalities and believable dialogue. Keep up the solid work, sir.
Author's Response:
Wow, I'm really flattered. You're one of the better authors here, so that really means a lot. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Finaminal chapter. Just hope ms Bianchi isn't too upset with him for not showing up for their appointment. Can't wait to see what happens with him an Allison. Also loved how nonchalant his mother was with him being down at her feet 'playing', hope to see more of that.
All an all great chapter, as always and greatly anticipating the next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Dean's appointment his teacher is at six, and the events of the chapter are ~4 ish, so he still has time to make it.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looking VERY forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: June 19 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow i love the world you created
[Report This]Date: June 19 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter. Kinda a bummer that dean didn't get to ms. Bianchi's house though. But really glad his sister saved him from that bitch(eventhough she just shrugged it off). Wonder how he will repay her generosity?(hope it involves her feet/toes) an can't wait to see his mom again. All in all I'm really enjoying this superb story.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 19 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, every chapter gets better. You write these stories so well, and this one seems like it's gonna be great both plot wise and sex wise. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've never been a huge fan of non-insect/non-micro size difference, but this story is turing me around on it. Phenomenally written, and well thought out. I hope you continue!
Date: June 17 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is my current favorite. Great pace and really good writting I can't wait to see what's in store for Dean.
Author's Response:
Ha, thank you! I hope I don't disappoint. I'll do my best.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Very cool idea the men not being able to read, although I have to wonder why his mom sent him to school in the first place?
This is such a great story an awesome idea for a story just can't wait to see what happens next
aaron
Author's Response:
Glad you like it aaron. Your question is addressed in a future chapter, so stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: June 15 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for writing this story littlemac! :) I'm really enjoying!
Author's Response:
Great! :) Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 15 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm very, very interested in this. I love the setting and the world you're crafting and I'd honestly rather explore it a little bit more than indulge in the fetish presented here. I'm always interested in stories where there is a chance for a reasonable, happy ending. Me being me though, I'd like to see a bit more of the mom involved, but this is just grand.
Author's Response:
You may just get what you want. I'll take your comments into consideration. Thank your for your interest.
Date: June 15 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pleeeease make the woman use dean as objects or as insoles. and make him paint the sisters toes etc. and the mom use him as in an insole. sorry to sound horny but this is like the best story ive read all year. keep it up! I check if youve updated it everyday haha. I liked when the sister used him as deodorant. Its erotic that the men are just used as objects
Date: June 15 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm sure Dean will be fine. Reading I think, is a good explaination.
Author's Response:
It is. I'm glad that you're arriving at that conclusion without me as the author having to come right out and say it. Thank you for the review, it's comments like these that assure me I'm writing a plot that's a bit more solid.
Date: June 15 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
What would be interesting is having a love interest for Dean, who attempts to save him. Obviously there will be a minority who do not support this kind of abuse. There was a somewhat similar story in which a boy found himself in an alternate reality and fell in love with his captur and eventually they return to our reality together. I can't remember the exact details, but I thought I added the story or the athuor to my favourites, though I seems I haven't.
Date: June 15 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
That's interesting. So am I right in assuming this reality is intended to be an opposite to our own? Intially I was a bit skeptical about your story, but in a way it's a kind of methaphor for certain societies in our reality, and I actually want to keep reading. Hopefully it won't be one of those stories that goes on forever, until the author gets bored.
Author's Response:
I'm happy it's holding your interest, and it will have a definite conclusion before it goes stale.