[Report This]Date: June 02 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Holy hell, this is a great strong start! It's great to read another story of yours. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to have such an enthusiastic fan! I hope I can follow through on my part, and write something really good!
Date: June 02 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
I did notice a few grammar mistakes, though your spelling is good, and these aren't all that frequent. Your story is still readable. Hopefully it won't be long until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and providing your input. Greatly appreciated!
Date: June 02 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's wierd, but I like it so far. Well wierd because Dean randomly wakes up in this place and he recgonizes his mother who is no doubt different in this world but can't remember what happened at school. What I'm trying to say, this therre are some plot holes I'm noticing, or maybe I'm just being picky.
I have an idea. Maybe he switched places with the Dean in this universe. I'm going to move onto the next chapter before I go on for too long.
Date: June 02 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was a quick update! The breastfeeding came as a surprise. If I had to choose between that and my mother regurgitating her food for me like a bird, I'd probably opt for the former, but I wonder how baby boys would get their mouths around nipples the size of tennis balls. I’m interested to see if that’s the only way a man can “eat,” and what would happen if he didn’t have a wife, mother, adult sister or daughter, or any other woman willing to offer herself up free of charge. In that case, a man’s menu when dining out might feature a lineup of ladies, so that as women at a Mexican restaurant are ordering burritos and enchiladas, guys are busy trying to decide between Bianca and Esmeralda.
Dean's mother's comment that "it's hard enough being a man out there" is the first indication that maybe it's not just he, but all men--maybe even male animals--who've been downsized. We'll see how the other boys are handling it.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful job on this story. Very imaginative. Love the very loving caring giant mother, an I also loved the little doggy door. That was a cool idea. I'm curious to see if his mom is on the shorter side or taller side of height..
Really looking forward to the rest of this tale because I didn't use to be a fan of the 20-99ft gts stories, I used to be more into the 100-499ft or the 1-12'' size. But just the way you write intrigues me greatly an I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Ps can we hope for more of the same(like from your other stories) as far as the foot/toe scenes are concerned?
Author's Response:
There will be feet, much like in my other works. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
MY GOD YES. You're back! I thought you had left.
On the story side, starting out great! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You always bring great stories!
Author's Response:
No, I'm not gone- just busy. I still have plenty of ideas so far. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 01 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this scenario, and I'm really looking forward to where you take it.
My only suggestion concerns this passage:
There was a rapping at my door, followed by the high pitch of my mother’s voice.
“Dean? Time to get ready for school honey.” Thundering footsteps continued on as she went back to her business.
By your story’s teaser, I figured Dean’s mother was a giant, but just reading this passage on its own, I think his thought process in recognizing that fact could be fleshed out more. For example, if Dean remarks that the rapping and his mother’s high-pitched (but LOUD!) voice are coming from high on the door instead of at his level, and/or he peers under the door and sees enormous feet, then more evidence builds for this extraordinary turn of events.
I like the “doggy door” concept, but hopefully females are taught to open such doors with particular care lest a male try to move between rooms at the same time and suddenly find a “wall” rushing toward him!
Author's Response:
This is a good point. I guess I've always been apprehensive about describing a gts voice because I'm afraid I'll make them seem like they're all yelling. I've purposefully always shyied away from that, and let the reader make a logical assumption. But you're right, in hindsight the scenario you picked probably could have been fleshed out more. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not going to lie, I flipped out the moment I saw you post a chapter for a new story, and I'm so excited to read it, I'm posting here before I read a single word of the content.
Author's Response:
Haha, wow, thank you!