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Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Giantess moms are awesome!!

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue this story I just found this and it pretty good, also are the the other stories connected to this one?

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

plzfinishthisplz

Reviewer: Kaku50 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2019 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

Continua esta historia

Reviewer: Captain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope LittleMac comes back to finish this story. He's always written quality content and I love when his female characters grow bigger. This story is one of his best along with Growing Body of Knowledge and Coming Clean. I remember reading his stuff in high school.

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

No war and yet technology levels are the same? What a joke. Adverstity drives innovation and a world without war would not develop. Unliss this reality is really damn old. Also I don't see how woman in charge would lead to every country develping equally.

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh damn

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a great story... a world I want to live in :)

Reviewer: SuicidalCyborg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

AMAZING story, i read straight from chapter 1 to 23, it was like a book you just couldnt put down! i absolutely love it! all the detail, all the imagination, all the twists and truns, they combine so well! Keep going with this! its just too good! If you are the author, i am proud to say that you are a gift... speaking of gifts... could you "gift " the process of uploading a story or chapter to a seiries, or a story to a story (whatever)... i would really like to expand on this with my own writing, of course, ill be sure to show a sample to you before producing the finished edit, but i just cant leave this story alone! also i have another 2 stories id like to publish on here (as i dont know yet how to publish i might need your help with that) and id really like your advice and critique on how to improve them... One last thing, check out " a chance with a cougar " and one other (when im able to find it, that one is a masterpiece ), im sure youd love to read one... Youre very much like their style of writing, but yours is just much more...creative, thats the word! Now, go be awesome and continue!

P.S. Good luck on your school work! im sure youll get a graduation for your writing skills XD

 

Reviewer: forfun32123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoy this story, its very well written and one of my favorites on the site. It's also great that the plot and backstory is thickening up a bit. Though, I really do miss the earlier scenarios of Dean and his mother.

The giant mother/tiny son relationship isn't explored too often, but here it is done superbly; Dean's mother is so sweet and caring, which adds a touch of realism and depth to the story. The monster mommy section was so great, that's the stuff I'm talking about! Its the moments like that between Dean and his mother that really give this story its magic, at least from my perspective.

I do hope they reunite at some point and that their relationship may grow. Perhaps Dean finds himself a girlfriend at school, and now his mom has to show him the ropes of how to handle a woman of that size and age. Perhaps Dean's confidence in his mother grows and he actually begins to want to flatter her and play games like monster mommy. The girlfriend scenario could also create some drama with Nina, which may play out pretty interestingly...   

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Excellent chapters both 22 and 23. I apparently missed the time when you posed 22, so I read both chapters together.

Wow, things have drastically changed. To me the best stories, giantess and non-giantess, are the ones that have things that are unexpected but also make sense.

Chapter 21 gave us a hint with the make me a mom commercial, but I never suspected that it was where all the men come from.

It's also interesting that a defected man was actually a special one. No names but numbers. This just further explains how little importance a man is in this world. Just a mere sex organ that women can eventually shove inside them.

Reminds me of those insects that have the female eating the male or when the male becomes attached to the larger female as an organ and he becomes part of her.

So what about the men that weren't made in the lab like Dean. They don't expire, so I wonder what's going to happen next.

I think this is the first time that Nina had sex with Dean. Seems like they both enjoyed it. Nina could carry Dean in her panties. That might be fun for both of them, or more to Nina.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ah, makes sense, I'm writing a story similar to this type of awakening. Where everyone is in there own little world.

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 23

I was hoping that in fact there had been an alternate reality and that his teacher was trying to find a way into it. This is still a fun read please continue.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm confused... how does he remember another reality if there never was any?

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad we're getting more world building and backstory with these recent chapters. Now I may be a macrophile but it seems like a sad, sad world for men to live in and I can safely say I would NOT want to be born into a world like this...Hell no. But it is a good story overall, I'm glad for the recent spike in updates, I've been a long time reader of this!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Cool to see strides being made in the plot of your mysterious little world. And of course, your affinity for maternal giantesses shines here as it does in much of the rest of the story. Good work, man.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

Best commercial I read about in a while.

It's like a pet shop except these men are specifically created to give women pleasure, and a baby girl.

Deans reaction was priceless. In fact, I was kinda laughing.

I read in some other giantess story that in order to have a baby, and man had to sacrifice himself. So the wife would insert him inside her vagina and he would swim into the Fallopian tubes, and finally his own body would be engulfed by the female egg. The man's body had the same use as sperm.

Is that how these men are used, or do these women force the guy to blow his load and then take them out of her for multiple uses?

And about that part where a world of women results in a utopian society. Well, according to some studies in the real world, businesses with a female boss have a greater connection to her employees and are more likely to work together and successfully compared to most businesses where a man is the boss. Maybe this world is our future.

With all these incidents, Nina has to hide Dean efficeintly if she is going to go around in the public. She can hide him in her bra, or even better, her underwear.

Another great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying the story so far.  I've noticed that you might have made certain plot decisions later after you'd already started writing.  In the first couple of chapters, he was attending school and allowed to walk around on his own, and it was never questioned.  This evolved into men kept out of sight with no role in society other then reproduction.  Everyone he encountered early on didn't question his higher intelligence until Nina.  His mother and sister seemed to treat him with great love and respect, they treasured him.  In this new chapter, men are breeding tools, and having sons seem undesirable.  A rape is treated as a disagreement between women, never mind that he was wounded in the process.  I only point out that there seems to be a difference between the way Dean is handled by those closest to him and other men in this world.

Otherwise, its a good story and I look forward to new additions.



Author's Response:

Most of these things you've pointed out are intended to be intentional, and will hopefully make MUCH more sense later on. Dean, as the narrator, is discovering the world alongside the reader. Its a challenging perspective to write, because I can't just spell some things out. If you're a bit confused at this juncture, I completely understand.  I hope and intend for the next chapter to make things a bit more clear. It's a very important chapter. For now, all I can say is that Dean is a special outlier amongst men.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved that Nina was finally able to breastfeed him. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron
PS will Madame President make an appearance

Author's Response:

Madame President will be featured at a later point. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

Well it doesn't matter what you write, your work is amazing. And I still really love this story. I'm not sure of the direction it is heading though.

Author's Response:

Thank you. The plot has been more exploratory in nature, which is necessary and fun, but eventually I do plan on taking it in a more solid direction. You shouldn't have to wait too much longer for that.

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