Date: March 25 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 6: The End
Continue it with Jennifer playing with him in her bedroom and him wanting to stay shrunk with her for a long time
Date: March 25 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued
Brandi is an asshole
Date: November 07 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wow, can't believe I never left a review for this one. Easily one of my favorites, on this site. Love the concept, love the size range, and I love the interaction. Awesome job.
Date: August 15 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
didnt started to read yet..for some reason the textsize increase/decrease feature doesnt work at this story. Did you write the story text in the comment field or such?
Date: July 27 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: The End
Nice to see this finally concluded. And, with a happy ending, too. Bravo!
Date: July 27 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wonderful story, disappointing ending. I HAte feet yet even though thats the main focus it's a great story. I wish it could of been expanded to other categories. I loved the whole security system, I wish she would of mistoke him for a theif. The ending was rather disappointing could of been expanded on. Would be nice to see whats going to happen to him now.
Date: July 27 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Ypu can't fathom how excited I was to see this story updated again after a year or so. Sad to see it end, but I am happy that you returned to it, and I look forward to anything you may write in the future!
Date: May 23 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Yes please continue this story, I really like this one
I'm hoping you make Brandi pay the price, maybe make her fuck Jen's nipple
lol
Keep up the good work
Date: May 22 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
This is one of my favorite stories going on atm, really do hope you plan to continue it.
Date: May 08 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
It's been a while since the last update. Well maybe just a week... I'm not impatient, just looking forward to more.
I've been fearing that you may have written yourself into a corner with chapter 5. After chapter 4 I envisioned the story going in a different direction than I can see chapter 5 taking it. I thought the characters would be left alone until Brandi returned, and with her working at a bar I imagined she would be in a good position to lure "victims" into Jennifer's appartment after work and shrinking them, routinely expanding the collection of tiny people at her mercy.
Haha, anyways, I've been enjoying this story and I look forward to seeing where it leads to.
Author's Response:
Sorry :( Work got in the way of my writing. I still have the story planned in my head. Just need the time.
Date: April 30 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Wow, another great character. :P Loved the little flare up of sibling rivalry. These girls better be careful around one another if any of them end up shrunk again!
Looking forward to seeing where you take this. One of my favorite stories right now, for sure!
Date: April 30 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Whoa... I wonder what'll happen next!
Date: April 30 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Whew ! What a nerve-wracking chapter. And, I have the perfect song for the next one:
"I'll say, I'll say 'Brandi. You're a bad girl. What a cute bug you will be! But, on my floor, you won't be allowed to pee.' "
Date: April 30 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Another Excellent Chapter, I love the shrunken girl on girl feet action, there is never enough of it to go around on this site.
Date: April 27 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
I really enjoy this story, please continue
I'm really looking forward to seeing what Jennifer might do to her friend Brandi when she's back to normal, makes for one nail biter of a story.
:)
Date: April 26 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued
Wow, it's like Brandi completely forgot they exist. It doesn't get more humiliating than that.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: April 26 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Loving the regular updates, and I certainly didn't see the story heading where it has. Twists galore! Keep it up, I like your work.
Date: April 26 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued
Know that the reason I said a size bigger than "micro" in my last review was that given the kind of story you're trying to right, a bigger size would be more believable. Micro is better for unaware stories, or those that involve crushing. Meaningful interation is better at a larger size. Though I am enjoying your story so I shouldn't complain too much.
Date: April 26 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued
I sure hope there's a chapter five! This is too good to leave it permanently like this.
Date: April 25 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: Second Experience Continued
Just wanted to add after I read the other reiews:
Why are people ALWAYS commenting on the micro storys "hey awesome story, but next time could he shrink to like 2-3 inches please?^^".... There are sooo rare micro stories here, like 1% or so, and soo rare micro unawre stories, like 0.1%. Why cant the people who like nonsense shrinking unaware with 2 inches in size just stay with the other 99% of the stories and leave the so damn hard to find good stories alone? Hope you dont listen to these comments and stay real micro. I loved the 1/16" size btw so much in the 3rd chapter!! Would be cool if it stays that size or gets even smaller.
Author's Response:
I love all different sizes, but micro has always been my favorite. I'm pretty sure this story will stay that way.