Date: September 08 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has always been one of my favorites. The scene where he makes the succubus spend the whole night licking his balls is something my mind always goes back to. Even if you don't finish it, it holds a special place in that spot where my heart should be.
Date: February 25 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story, I would love to see a tiny man/boy to be usedas s couples sex toy. Say shrunk and tortured first then put into a condom.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Realised that this story didn't have a 5 Star rating. (Hopefully rectified)
I'll give you a fantastic in-depth review when you post the next chapter.
I swear I'm not trying to goad you.
Much.
Author's Response:
You're on.
Date: April 19 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
One thing I should have added in my review is that I really like the Succubus, but the giant man aspect of the story put me off. Well, this is giantessworld after all, so not many people will like giant men. I like the concept, so if it was a witch rather than a wizard let's say (well female mage), I would certainly continue reading.
I really only include giant men where needed for purposes of realism in my stories, like I have a crime investigation story involving a tiny woman, but I don't like anything sexual involving them. You're a woman, so I can understand your attraction, but I'm not gay and I come here as a break from the male dominated society which is the reason for so much of the world's problems. Men are responsible for most of the world's problems... With the noticeable exception of the president of Argentina, who happens to be woman, and wants to take the Falkland islands away from Britain, where I live.
Date: April 15 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi Sarah, welcome to giantessworld,
I liked your story because it's so different, but at the same time, it's not the sort of thing I'd usually read. I gave it chance anyway, and your spelling and grammar are very good though I probably wouldn't have reviewed it seeing as I don't have much else to say, and I didn't enjoy that much (genre wise; your writing ability is good) but when I saw your note at the bottom saying "feedback helps me write", I thought I'd say hi. You're much better at writing than most on here, so although I didn't enjoy this story specifically I have no doubt that you will have more ideas in the future. I know getting more feedback would encourage me to update stories quicker but most (nearly everyone on here when you look at the statistics) don't contribute anything whatsoever so I thought leaving a review will encourage you to come back.
Thanks for sharing in any case. It's always nice to see a new author.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you appreciated it on a technical level, if not a sexual one. At least at the core I'm doing something right.
Date: April 14 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
The genres forthis story aren't really my preference, so it would be unfair to rate the story, so I won't. However, the storytelling is absolutely enrapturing, and though I wanted to skip past the giant male parts, I couldn't, because I was afraid that I would miss important plot. You had me under the impression that you were new at writing...now I know very differently! Im excited to see Wendy's descent into the dark power she's been introduced to.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Arty! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I'm sorry that the giant parts wig you out, but fear not, for there will be plenty for you to enjoy.
Date: April 14 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was really well done. The writing style, vocabulary, choice of words and general flow of ideas were excellent.
It's easy to read and it creates a vivid image in the mind that really helps you lose yourself in the story.
Also, if I could point out one thing that excels, it's your dialogue. It's believeable and powerful and enhances the immersion.
I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! And I'll do my best to not disappoint!