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Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Oh, here's one of the stories you wrote that I read: I loved it, especially because I love mother-son interactions in GTS stories! ^o^

(I'm the one who sent you a PM a few minutes ago, which you'll probably receive via email: just in case you didn't receive it, I'm a GTS artist who needs your help to contact someone you know x_x) 



Author's Response:

Sorry, the PMs for the site have been broken for a while so I didn't see. I see you found Malaka, though.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Cherry on Top

Great story. I'm surprised I have never read it. Ho you keep writing, you have a real talent.



Author's Response:

thanks very much, glad you liked it

Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom

Quite right enjoyed it.  A bit more interested though in what life for little Alex have been with mum if she found him.

Reviewer: LittleLad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Minor spag error 'exudation-doused toes' should be 'exudate-doused toes' an exudate is a fluid with a high content of protein (like sweat) wheras exudation the action of exuding. Once a biologist...Still a biologist. Aide from that you're absolutly my favorite writer on this site. Keep it up dude!



Author's Response:

Ah, I see; thanks for catching that, and for reading.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom

I think you know that I think you are a very gifted writer. It's taken me quite awhile to read the rest of this story. I have been quite sick for awhile.

I enjoyed the story very much. I would have preferred the son didn't die. But hey that was the choice you went with and you did very well. Not what I normally like to read on here. I prefer the torture stuff. But I did enjoy this story very much.

Dave

 

Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom

You are a fantastic writer, and you have truly captured a scenario that I previously had only witnessed in my imagination.  I love how you focus on more than just providing the scenario.  You provide excellent character development and let us into the mind of the protagonist in a way that makes the story stand above others of its type. 

And I'm glad you decided to go with the ending you did.



Author's Response:

thanks! i'm glad you liked the ending, i realize it wasn't particularly original, but my goal here was just to play it safe and see how it went since i'm not used to writing this genre.

Reviewer: farnicle3 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Truly a gifted writer. Your talent and attention to detail never ceases to amaze. Thanks for everything.

 

Just curious as to what you're planning next. If it means anything I'd really like to see how you handle a story absent of shrinking. I understand that shrinkage is the entire shpiel of this site, but the chapters in "A Little Blackmail" where Jack was normal sized were pretty damn good. Anyways, thanks again and I look forward to seeing what you do next.



Author's Response:

thank you, it's high praise to hear that you enjoyed the stuff that wasn't even directly giantess-related. i'm not quite sure how well it would fit to have a story absent of shrinking here, as that sort of defeats the purpose of the site's concept, but i will continue to experiment with backstory chapters in other stories where the characters may not necessarily be participating in size difference interactions

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Very well done.  Not my genre either, but your work is always outstanding.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

This was a good story and showcased your prowess at different genres of the giantess fetish.  I know you aren't into death endings, but I loved your "Mommy's Time Out" story," and honestly would like to see it continued, or you attempt a new story, albeit similar in topic. I guess I'm hoping to see a foot story with a dom-mom and tiny son that ends painfully and smelly for the son. You do a good job of conveying true angst on the part of the tiny person, that's for sure.  As always, your prolific output is appreciated no matter what sort of story you decide to write.



Author's Response:

thanks. i do enjoy the mother-son genre, though as you know, i am not into a foot crush ending, but i'll probably find some variations for it

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Slight Wrinkle

Story is just great. An your details are superb. I just hope that it doesn't turn to VORE.. But some mouth play wouldn't hurt. Love how she casually chats with her husband completely oblivious to her sons plight. Awesome job on conveying that scene.

aaron

Reviewer: Mymiridion Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Very very interested to see where this story goes. You have a great writing style. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

~Mymiridion~



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4: Death March

Well I just read the 4 chapters in one sitting. I'm not really a fan of the micro genre. But I like all your other stories. So I gave it a shot. It's very good.

Dave



Author's Response:

thanks for giving it a shot, glad you like it

Reviewer: exiguus Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Death March

I love it.  You have done a fantastic job with the description of the mother.  

(On a side note, I think you meant 'horizontal' instead of 'vertical' in par. 9.)



Author's Response:

ah, good catch. thanks

Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4: Death March

Nice a new Jack Smith piece :)

While the writing is quite good I have to say, sofar I keep hoping little Alex is discovered.  Michelle sounds like one delicious MILF.  Judging from Alex's fantasies of being discovered it sounds like she has a tender heart.  A rare and welcome quality in gts fiction.

Eagerly awaiting your next installment.

Cheers



Author's Response:

we'll just have to see, won't we? ;)  hard to be noticed when you're only about a fourth of an inch tall

Reviewer: fadeedodokes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Good job!  I'm enjoying it.  I can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: littlemac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 4: Death March

Got some good suspense buillding, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Unaware footplay.....probably my most favorite aspect of this fantasy.  Havent gotten around to reading this whole story closely yet, but briefly skimming this chapter caught my attention.  Knowing your other stories, I bet its a real treat.

Keep it up dude!



Author's Response:

thanks, i'm glad this story is to your taste

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Great update. Spectacular detail!!
Cannot wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Reviewer: littlemac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Little Son That Could

Absolutely love the unaware angle you've presented. You've attempted to branch out into a new genre as a writer, and in my opinion have nailed it spot on. Well done, and I hope to see more!



Author's Response:

thanks, i'm glad to hear the new venture is sort of working :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Little Son That Could

This story is spectacular. Eventhough ive never been a fan of the unaware genre this story has me hooked. An I just cant wait to see what happens next. Must say, this story has really surprised me.

aaron

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