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Date: October 09 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

Open fire again, everyone!!



Author's Response: Sorry! The next chapter will be more like a conference (with these new protagonists) to compare notes.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank god for beds that break falls. Not sorry to see Plaisantine shot dead. (At least I hope she's dead) Did not expect Harry Houdini to show up.



Author's Response: That's what stage magicians specialize in: the unexpected! ;-)

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Date: August 15 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Order in a canon, Sir Anthony. Take the blighteress (is that a word) down!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no! Wonder how they will get out of this one? I knew that monster was trouble.

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Date: July 21 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

The plot twists contiune. Bet that sea creature is trouble.



Author's Response: And, you'd win big!

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Date: July 20 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

As in the Tiny Dan on this forum?



Author's Response: More like a (hopefully) reasonable facsimile. ;-)

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Date: July 10 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

And now Pixis is in it too, Senor Carycomic



Author's Response: I was using some of my later paternal grandmother's Italian. But, they're both Romance languages. So, it's no biggie (as they say in California).

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Date: June 23 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Is sleepy Mr G the inspiration for Mr Galstaff?

Is timescribe slow to pick up on things?

Will Pamela find herself in this story?

Stay tuned for Carycomic's next burst of inspiration.



Author's Response: No, Galstaff is a totally separate (yet equally no longer heard from) author on this website.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bit too tried to make a proper review. But I like what I see so far. 



Author's Response: Well, get some sleep. And, try again, second thing in the morning. ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

And good going on your part to come up with such a clever codename. Let's hope SHE notices and gives you credit.



Author's Response: Well, it literally translates from the French as "jester" or "jokester." And, it does appear to be a legitimate French surname, as well. So, I decided to go with it. As for "Port Manteau?" That was a pun, in its own right. But, I'll let you find out how, for yourself. ;-D

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Date: June 20 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

So he DONned his moustache.

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Date: June 20 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reminds me of a woman who sent me a card that said:

"Before I met you I was troubled by reality....

Now I don't even miss it."

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Date: June 19 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

And as you've probably guessed, my giantessworld is working again.



Author's Response: If that means you've hit another writer's block, then I can empathize. Believe me. Sometimes, when mine are extra thick, it can take me up to two _months_ to post just one new chapter!! So, take as much time as you need to mentally refresh yourself. Rest assured, I'll be here. To paraphrase a certain Mexican bandit chief: "Real life? I don't need no stinkin' real life!"

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Date: June 19 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Dr Thorpe & Moustache Pete in the one story? Yes, indeed, Sir Anthony would go pale. LOL



Author's Response: Well, as I mentioned in a previous reply, "Moustache Pete" was a genuine-though-derogatory-term that American-born Mafiosi had for Sicilian-born dons, in general. I don't know if there was ever such a don, in particular. But, the nickname certainly had to start somewhere!

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Date: June 19 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Pamela Plaisantine? Not another nod to one of our names? There's / was a giantessworld member called Pamelapleases.



Author's Response: I was wondering if you would notice that. Good going! :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Intresting turn of events. 



Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

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Date: June 17 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Nice to see new chapters added to this story. 



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm mentally formulating chapter 14, as we speak. :-)

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Date: June 03 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ten feet tall! Dr Thorpe is interested.



Author's Response: As I pm'd to Mr. G, I initially mistook his 2nd review for one of your own. So, I heartily apologize to you, as well.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

 "...an alibi like that is more plausible for the common man."

I like that line. 

A ten foot snake charmer would defentely catch my intrest.



Author's Response: Your counterpart was merely quoting Sir Anthony as part of a semi-good-natured jibe. As for the snake charmer? She is yet another of the demi-giantesses (I absolutely and stubbornly refuse to use the adjective "mini-"!) who will be appearing in subsequent chapters.

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Date: May 31 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Too tried to make detailed comments. But you got an intresting world here. Intresting name the piiot has.



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Elvis Presley: "Thank ya. Thank ya, very much!"

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